2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)北師大版寫作專題講座課件：第十二講 應(yīng)用文（二）——日記
[題目要求]
下午數(shù)學(xué)考試，你成績不好，心情郁悶。晚上幾個好朋友邀你去歌廳(KTV)唱歌，你們一晚上唱得很盡興。你用日記的形式記錄下你今天的活動及感受。 日記須包括以下幾個要點： (1)你因數(shù)學(xué)成績不佳，心情一直不好。 (2)晚上朋友們邀請你去KTV唱歌，這是你第一次去KTV。 (3)大家唱得很高興，而你一直當(dāng)聽眾，你覺得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。 (4)在大家的鼓勵下，你終于拿起麥克風(fēng)(microphone), 唱了一首英文歌曲I Believe I Can Fly。 (5)現(xiàn)在你心情舒暢了，更重要的是你找回了自信。 (6)你在日記中對自己說了這樣一句話：“……”
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2．日記必須包括所有要點，但可以用不同的句式表達。 Friday, Nov.18, 2011
Sunny
This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ [技法指導(dǎo)] 日記是把自己在當(dāng)天生活中經(jīng)歷的有意義的事以及見聞感受記錄下來的書面形式。寫英文日記時應(yīng)注意以下三點： 1．注意格式。
(1)日期、星期一般頂格寫在正文之前?？梢韵葘懶瞧?，后寫年月日，也可以先寫年月日，后寫星期幾。
(2)天氣情況應(yīng)寫在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之處。表示天氣情況常用fine, cloudy, rainy, snowy, windy, stormy等形容詞來表示。
(3)正文。正文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該思想健康，積極向上。文章可長可短，開頭語應(yīng)簡潔，結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)發(fā)表感想。 2．注意人稱選擇。
由于日記的內(nèi)容多是記敘自己的親身經(jīng)歷或抒發(fā)自己的感想，所以多用第一人稱I或we。
3．確定正確的時態(tài)。
日記一般寫當(dāng)天發(fā)生的事情，因此通常使用一般過去時。當(dāng)然，即使發(fā)生在過去的事情，為了描寫生動，也可以使用現(xiàn)在時，以表現(xiàn)當(dāng)時的情況。發(fā)表感想或議論時則可用現(xiàn)在時或?qū)頃r。 第一步 構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文 [謀篇布局] [黃金模板]
________(月，日，年，星期)________(天氣) ________________________(標(biāo)題)
Today/Yesterday,
I/we did ________________(事件)．
In the morning,
we ... then,
...after that ... By the time ... We had a good time. Finally ________________(具體敘述事情經(jīng)過). I'll never forget the memorable day! From this activity, I have learned that/I think ________(事件意義，自己的感想)．
第二步 打造亮句，增色文章 1．因為我數(shù)學(xué)考試成績不佳，我整個下午情緒低落。 ?I was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. ?I got bad grades in the math exam, so I was in low spirits the whole afternoon. 2．在同學(xué)們的鼓勵下，我拿起麥克風(fēng)唱了一首英文歌曲 I Believe I Can Fly。 ?Encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I Believe I Can Fly. ?Because I was encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song which is entitled I Believe I Can Fly. 第三步 串句成文，保證流暢 Friday, Nov. 18,
2011Sunny
This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.
This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didn't want to go. I was (had been) in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. At the KTV,
everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me — I was only one of the audiences. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well. Encouraged by my classmates,
I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I Believe I Can Fly.
I have become cheerful now and above all I've regained self-confidence. I believe that,
the worst enemy in one's life is oneself. I shouldn't lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try. (2024·北京模擬)假設(shè)你是某所中學(xué)的學(xué)生，3月22日(世界水日)你參加了你班開展的一系列節(jié)水宣傳活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以日記的形式記錄當(dāng)天的活動內(nèi)容。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。 提示詞：宣傳材料leaflets；危機crisis March 22,
2024 Thursday
Sunny
Today is World Water Day. ______________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ 參考范文：
March 22,
2024 Thursday
Sunny
Today is World Water Day. In the morning,
we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally,
we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities.
At 2：00 pm,
we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,
calling on people to save water. Around 3 o'clock,
the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present,
including me.
After the speech,
we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life. I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use,
and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen,
for example,
the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.
Today,
I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.
[題目要求]
下午數(shù)學(xué)考試，你成績不好，心情郁悶。晚上幾個好朋友邀你去歌廳(KTV)唱歌，你們一晚上唱得很盡興。你用日記的形式記錄下你今天的活動及感受。 日記須包括以下幾個要點： (1)你因數(shù)學(xué)成績不佳，心情一直不好。 (2)晚上朋友們邀請你去KTV唱歌，這是你第一次去KTV。 (3)大家唱得很高興，而你一直當(dāng)聽眾，你覺得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。 (4)在大家的鼓勵下，你終于拿起麥克風(fēng)(microphone), 唱了一首英文歌曲I Believe I Can Fly。 (5)現(xiàn)在你心情舒暢了，更重要的是你找回了自信。 (6)你在日記中對自己說了這樣一句話：“……”
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2．日記必須包括所有要點，但可以用不同的句式表達。 Friday, Nov.18, 2011
Sunny
This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ [技法指導(dǎo)] 日記是把自己在當(dāng)天生活中經(jīng)歷的有意義的事以及見聞感受記錄下來的書面形式。寫英文日記時應(yīng)注意以下三點： 1．注意格式。
(1)日期、星期一般頂格寫在正文之前?？梢韵葘懶瞧?，后寫年月日，也可以先寫年月日，后寫星期幾。
(2)天氣情況應(yīng)寫在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之處。表示天氣情況常用fine, cloudy, rainy, snowy, windy, stormy等形容詞來表示。
(3)正文。正文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該思想健康，積極向上。文章可長可短，開頭語應(yīng)簡潔，結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)發(fā)表感想。 2．注意人稱選擇。
由于日記的內(nèi)容多是記敘自己的親身經(jīng)歷或抒發(fā)自己的感想，所以多用第一人稱I或we。
3．確定正確的時態(tài)。
日記一般寫當(dāng)天發(fā)生的事情，因此通常使用一般過去時。當(dāng)然，即使發(fā)生在過去的事情，為了描寫生動，也可以使用現(xiàn)在時，以表現(xiàn)當(dāng)時的情況。發(fā)表感想或議論時則可用現(xiàn)在時或?qū)頃r。 第一步 構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文 [謀篇布局] [黃金模板]
________(月，日，年，星期)________(天氣) ________________________(標(biāo)題)
Today/Yesterday,
I/we did ________________(事件)．
In the morning,
we ... then,
...after that ... By the time ... We had a good time. Finally ________________(具體敘述事情經(jīng)過). I'll never forget the memorable day! From this activity, I have learned that/I think ________(事件意義，自己的感想)．
第二步 打造亮句，增色文章 1．因為我數(shù)學(xué)考試成績不佳，我整個下午情緒低落。 ?I was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. ?I got bad grades in the math exam, so I was in low spirits the whole afternoon. 2．在同學(xué)們的鼓勵下，我拿起麥克風(fēng)唱了一首英文歌曲 I Believe I Can Fly。 ?Encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I Believe I Can Fly. ?Because I was encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song which is entitled I Believe I Can Fly. 第三步 串句成文，保證流暢 Friday, Nov. 18,
2011Sunny
This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.
This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didn't want to go. I was (had been) in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. At the KTV,
everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me — I was only one of the audiences. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well. Encouraged by my classmates,
I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I Believe I Can Fly.
I have become cheerful now and above all I've regained self-confidence. I believe that,
the worst enemy in one's life is oneself. I shouldn't lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try. (2024·北京模擬)假設(shè)你是某所中學(xué)的學(xué)生，3月22日(世界水日)你參加了你班開展的一系列節(jié)水宣傳活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以日記的形式記錄當(dāng)天的活動內(nèi)容。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。 提示詞：宣傳材料leaflets；危機crisis March 22,
2024 Thursday
Sunny
Today is World Water Day. ______________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ 參考范文：
March 22,
2024 Thursday
Sunny
Today is World Water Day. In the morning,
we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally,
we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities.
At 2：00 pm,
we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,
calling on people to save water. Around 3 o'clock,
the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present,
including me.
After the speech,
we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life. I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use,
and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen,
for example,
the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.
Today,
I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.
