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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:　　1)科學(xué)究竟帶給我們什么?這個(gè)問(wèn)題一直備受爭(zhēng)議　　2)很多人認(rèn)為科學(xué)帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，比如污染、核武器　　3)你對(duì)此的看法是　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話(huà)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)針對(duì)該話(huà)題提出一種反面觀點(diǎn)，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)勎业目捶?，由此可判斷本文?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文?！　「鶕?jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出關(guān)于科學(xué)的爭(zhēng)議，簡(jiǎn)單闡述科學(xué)帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題;表明我對(duì)科學(xué)的正面看法，闡述科學(xué)帶給我們的好處;得出結(jié)論：科學(xué)發(fā)展利大于弊?！　「叻址段摹　hat Does Modern Science Bring us?　　The question What does modern science bring us? has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]Whats more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】　　[1]引起極大的爭(zhēng)議?！　2]對(duì)負(fù)責(zé)，是的原因。　　[3]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密?！　4]與相比，過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)?！　5]插入語(yǔ)?！　6]也，還，表示并列?！　7]利大于弊?！　8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處強(qiáng)調(diào)的是notbut連接的并列主語(yǔ)。　　[9]毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)。　　[10]充分利用?！　〖丫渑R摹　　1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.　　臨?。何艺J(rèn)為，與傳統(tǒng)的字典相比，電子字典攜帶和使用起來(lái)更加方便?！　__________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.　　臨?。毫私庖粋€(gè)人，我們可以看他交什么樣的朋友，也可以看他讀什么樣的書(shū)?！　__________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：It is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.　　臨摹：一個(gè)人的成功不是取決于他的外貌而是取決于他的能力。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　【KEY】　　1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.　　2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.　　3. It is not ones appearance but his capability that decides his final success.

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:　　1)科學(xué)究竟帶給我們什么?這個(gè)問(wèn)題一直備受爭(zhēng)議　　2)很多人認(rèn)為科學(xué)帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，比如污染、核武器　　3)你對(duì)此的看法是　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話(huà)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)針對(duì)該話(huà)題提出一種反面觀點(diǎn)，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)勎业目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出關(guān)于科學(xué)的爭(zhēng)議，簡(jiǎn)單闡述科學(xué)帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題;表明我對(duì)科學(xué)的正面看法，闡述科學(xué)帶給我們的好處;得出結(jié)論：科學(xué)發(fā)展利大于弊?！　「叻址段摹　hat Does Modern Science Bring us?　　The question What does modern science bring us? has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]Whats more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】　　[1]引起極大的爭(zhēng)議?！　2]對(duì)負(fù)責(zé)，是的原因。　　[3]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密?！　4]與相比，過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)?！　5]插入語(yǔ)。　　[6]也，還，表示并列?！　7]利大于弊?！　8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處強(qiáng)調(diào)的是notbut連接的并列主語(yǔ)。　　[9]毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)。　　[10]充分利用。　　佳句臨摹　　1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.　　臨?。何艺J(rèn)為，與傳統(tǒng)的字典相比，電子字典攜帶和使用起來(lái)更加方便?！　__________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.　　臨?。毫私庖粋€(gè)人，我們可以看他交什么樣的朋友，也可以看他讀什么樣的書(shū)?！　__________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：It is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.　　臨摹：一個(gè)人的成功不是取決于他的外貌而是取決于他的能力?！　__________________________________________________________________________.　　【KEY】　　1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.　　2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.　　3. It is not ones appearance but his capability that decides his final success.