新GRE寫作:issue開頭怎么寫
新gre issue開頭策略a
例如這個題目:So much is new and complex today that looking backfor an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present.
開頭前兩句話可以這樣寫:The English Philosopher Francis Bacon once statedHistories make men wise; poets, witty; the mathematics, subtle; naturalphilosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend. Accordingto Bacon, history comes before all the other knowledge and provides us with abundantwisdom.
然后可以轉(zhuǎn)折說,但是在現(xiàn)代社會,人們有了一個新的觀點(diǎn)。
新gre issue開頭策略b
例如這個題目:There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has aresponsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey andresist unjust laws.
開頭前兩句話可以這樣寫:In todays society, the legal system is playing an essential and ultimatelypowerful role in regulating daily activities, maintaining the functions of economyand protecting individuals rights.
然后可以進(jìn)一步描述有人認(rèn)為法律分為兩種。
開頭的第二件事需要restate the issue. 用不同于題目的語言描述問題, 這樣的描述體現(xiàn)了你對于問題的理解,也決定了你后文對這個問題的闡述方式。
例如這個題目:Scientists and other researchers should focus theirresearch on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Restate可以是:Scientists and scholars should devote their energy onresearch projects which target at benefiting as many people as possible.
或者更加詳細(xì)的分析,例如這個題目:How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned howto raise children who can help bring about a better society.
可以寫:The speakers statement is actually a dualclaim. First, the future of our society is determined by how todays childrenare socialized. Second, our educational system fails to shape our children intosomeone who can improve various aspects of the society.
第三件事情是陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。這里需要涵蓋下文所出現(xiàn)的所有論點(diǎn)。如果某個論點(diǎn)沒有被包含在內(nèi),那么會給讀者surprise,這在學(xué)術(shù)寫作里面是很不好的。當(dāng)然將全文的觀點(diǎn)濃縮在1-2句話里是非常困難的。
例如這個題目:Educations should find out what students want included in thecurriculum and then offer it to them.
觀點(diǎn)可以用兩句話說明:Although personal interests can serve as motivationfor students to learn better , its unreasonable for educators to incorporate all the different interestsin any curriculum. Moreover, educations should shape the interests of students and helpthem acquire useful techniques and knowledge .
或者這個題目:It is the artist, not the critic, whogives society something of lasting value.
觀點(diǎn)可以用一句話說明:Although I admit that the virtue of the artlies in the work itself , we should not overlook critics role in discovering, evaluating,and disseminating the work of artists and how theyhelp popularize the arts value in the society .
最后還有幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)
1. 新gre issue開頭的長度:也許你覺得有很多話可以說,也許你想把開頭寫得引人入勝,但開頭的長度是需要控制的。如果有3個觀點(diǎn)段,那么開頭大致不應(yīng)該超過全文的1/5。因?yàn)槿绻愕拈_頭過長,那么會顯得頭重腳輕,或者顯得文中的論述不夠充分。
2.新gre issue寫開頭的訓(xùn)練:寫開頭是需要訓(xùn)練的,也很容易訓(xùn)練。拿到一個題目,很快的問自己,這個題目關(guān)鍵在哪里,為什么會有這樣的問題,我的觀點(diǎn)是什么。然后按照前文說的順序?qū)懴聛砭秃昧?。熟練了以后,可以?分鐘內(nèi)把開頭寫好,那么后文時間也能更加寬裕。
新gre issue開頭開可以采用一些其他的方法,比如開門見山、欲抑先揚(yáng)等,具體的方法需要考生多看新gre issue范文,開拓思路,形成自己獨(dú)特的寫作風(fēng)格。
新gre issue開頭策略a
例如這個題目:So much is new and complex today that looking backfor an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present.
開頭前兩句話可以這樣寫:The English Philosopher Francis Bacon once statedHistories make men wise; poets, witty; the mathematics, subtle; naturalphilosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend. Accordingto Bacon, history comes before all the other knowledge and provides us with abundantwisdom.
然后可以轉(zhuǎn)折說,但是在現(xiàn)代社會,人們有了一個新的觀點(diǎn)。
新gre issue開頭策略b
例如這個題目:There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has aresponsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey andresist unjust laws.
開頭前兩句話可以這樣寫:In todays society, the legal system is playing an essential and ultimatelypowerful role in regulating daily activities, maintaining the functions of economyand protecting individuals rights.
然后可以進(jìn)一步描述有人認(rèn)為法律分為兩種。
開頭的第二件事需要restate the issue. 用不同于題目的語言描述問題, 這樣的描述體現(xiàn)了你對于問題的理解,也決定了你后文對這個問題的闡述方式。
例如這個題目:Scientists and other researchers should focus theirresearch on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Restate可以是:Scientists and scholars should devote their energy onresearch projects which target at benefiting as many people as possible.
或者更加詳細(xì)的分析,例如這個題目:How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned howto raise children who can help bring about a better society.
可以寫:The speakers statement is actually a dualclaim. First, the future of our society is determined by how todays childrenare socialized. Second, our educational system fails to shape our children intosomeone who can improve various aspects of the society.
第三件事情是陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。這里需要涵蓋下文所出現(xiàn)的所有論點(diǎn)。如果某個論點(diǎn)沒有被包含在內(nèi),那么會給讀者surprise,這在學(xué)術(shù)寫作里面是很不好的。當(dāng)然將全文的觀點(diǎn)濃縮在1-2句話里是非常困難的。
例如這個題目:Educations should find out what students want included in thecurriculum and then offer it to them.
觀點(diǎn)可以用兩句話說明:Although personal interests can serve as motivationfor students to learn better , its unreasonable for educators to incorporate all the different interestsin any curriculum. Moreover, educations should shape the interests of students and helpthem acquire useful techniques and knowledge .
或者這個題目:It is the artist, not the critic, whogives society something of lasting value.
觀點(diǎn)可以用一句話說明:Although I admit that the virtue of the artlies in the work itself , we should not overlook critics role in discovering, evaluating,and disseminating the work of artists and how theyhelp popularize the arts value in the society .
最后還有幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)
1. 新gre issue開頭的長度:也許你覺得有很多話可以說,也許你想把開頭寫得引人入勝,但開頭的長度是需要控制的。如果有3個觀點(diǎn)段,那么開頭大致不應(yīng)該超過全文的1/5。因?yàn)槿绻愕拈_頭過長,那么會顯得頭重腳輕,或者顯得文中的論述不夠充分。
2.新gre issue寫開頭的訓(xùn)練:寫開頭是需要訓(xùn)練的,也很容易訓(xùn)練。拿到一個題目,很快的問自己,這個題目關(guān)鍵在哪里,為什么會有這樣的問題,我的觀點(diǎn)是什么。然后按照前文說的順序?qū)懴聛砭秃昧?。熟練了以后,可以?分鐘內(nèi)把開頭寫好,那么后文時間也能更加寬裕。
新gre issue開頭開可以采用一些其他的方法,比如開門見山、欲抑先揚(yáng)等,具體的方法需要考生多看新gre issue范文,開拓思路,形成自己獨(dú)特的寫作風(fēng)格。