2024屆高考北師大版英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題技能突破：12 短文改錯(cuò)之通讀全文糾正邏輯錯(cuò)誤（含解析）
專題技能突破(12)短文改錯(cuò)之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯(cuò)誤
【技能講解】 通讀全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動(dòng)關(guān)系，及行文邏輯。有時(shí)孤立的分析某個(gè)句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)正確、語義通順，無錯(cuò)可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文，便會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方，需做出改正。
典例剖析1.[2024·課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.
[答案] think→thought 考查時(shí)態(tài)。由was, hoped和would be可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)。
2．[2024·課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.
[答案] your→our或the 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，故改為our, 也可用定冠詞the來限定。
3．[2024·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.
[答案] is→was 考查時(shí)態(tài)。全文用的都是過去時(shí)，所以把is改為was。
4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? Ifyou are me, would you talk to him?
[答案] him→them 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯(cuò)誤，故將him改為them。
5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.
[答案] cause→causing 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。causing作結(jié)果狀語，表“自然而然的結(jié)果”用現(xiàn)在分詞。
技能演練短文改錯(cuò)
(一)
A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
答案：
A man
been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes , the bus arrived
did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little ， so he started running after the bus. ， the bus never stopped. The man kept
the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save
bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the
until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed ， “You fool! Do you know how
you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
(二)
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
答案：
Last week my parents and I took a
trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's
famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon
we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of
were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking
since the scenery was so . The time
quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
the moment my head touched the pillow.
專題技能突破(12)短文改錯(cuò)之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯(cuò)誤
【技能講解】 通讀全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動(dòng)關(guān)系，及行文邏輯。有時(shí)孤立的分析某個(gè)句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)正確、語義通順，無錯(cuò)可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文，便會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方，需做出改正。
典例剖析1.[2024·課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.
[答案] think→thought 考查時(shí)態(tài)。由was, hoped和would be可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)。
2．[2024·課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.
[答案] your→our或the 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，故改為our, 也可用定冠詞the來限定。
3．[2024·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.
[答案] is→was 考查時(shí)態(tài)。全文用的都是過去時(shí)，所以把is改為was。
4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? Ifyou are me, would you talk to him?
[答案] him→them 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯(cuò)誤，故將him改為them。
5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.
[答案] cause→causing 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。causing作結(jié)果狀語，表“自然而然的結(jié)果”用現(xiàn)在分詞。
技能演練短文改錯(cuò)
(一)
A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
答案：
A man
been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes , the bus arrived
did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little ， so he started running after the bus. ， the bus never stopped. The man kept
the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save
bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the
until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed ， “You fool! Do you know how
you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
(二)
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
答案：
Last week my parents and I took a
trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's
famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon
we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of
were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking
since the scenery was so . The time
quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
the moment my head touched the pillow.
