2024屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選短文改錯8
高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選：短文改錯
1.
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are
playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the
public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.
Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all
courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days
or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is
expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will
encourage more people to participate in sports.
2.Error correction
I'm a senior three student．I often do bad in myexams，so I have been trying to catch up the others．But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes
68
l cannot eat or sleep well at a night．I’m afraid thatI may get low marks in the tests again even if I work
70
hard than before． I have no courage to face low marks．I cannot fix my mind to my study, whenever I think of
72
this. It is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on
73
my school works. I’m feeling very sad. Would you
74
please tell me what I should deal with my worry?
75
3.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）;如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）則按下列情況改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
該行少一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在右邊橫線上寫出所加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正的詞。
注意：原行沒錯的不要改。
A married couple were in a car while the wife turned to
76．__________
her husband and asked, “Would you like to stop for coffee?” “No,
77．__________
thanks．” he answered truthfully．But they didn’t stop．However,
78．__________
the wife, who has indeed wanted to stop, became angry, because
79．_________
she felt her preference had not considered．The husband, seeing that
80．_________
his wife was angry, became frustrated．Why didn’t she just say that
81．_________
she wanted? Unfortunately, he failed in to see that his wife was
82．_________
asking the question, in order not to get an immediately decision, 83．_________
but rather to begin discussion．And the women didn’t realize that
84．_________
when her husband said no, he was just express his preference, not
85．_________
giving an order．
4.此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）;如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）則按下列情況改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
該行少一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在右邊橫線上寫出所加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正的詞。
注意：原行沒錯的不要改。
Dear Sir,
I am university student．I once thought life at the
76．_________
university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind．7．_________
I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 78．_________
into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and 9．_________
happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now． 0．_________
They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward 81．_________
me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 2．_________
I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving 3．_________
alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true
_________
friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon．5．_________
Yours,
Peter
5.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
For as long as I can remember, I have been very bad
at arguing with people ．As soon as someone agree
76．
with me, I get angry because I feel attacking, like the
77．
other person is out to show that I am right ．And for
78．
some reason , I hate being wrong! But my immediate
79．
reaction is to get very defensive．I rise my voice, and
80．
I end up saying something I later regret．Needless to say,
81．
the whole thing ends with me blaming for myself , and the
82．
other person felt alienated （疏遠(yuǎn)的） from me．This
83．
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate!
84．
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my
85．
being afraid of being wrong ．
6.
other person is out to show that I am right ．And for
78．
some reason , I hate being wrong ! But
my immediate
79．
reaction is to get very defensive ．I rise my voice , and
80．
I end up saying something I later regret ．Needless to say,
81．
the whole thing ends with me blaming
for myself , and the
82．
other person felt alienated （疏遠(yuǎn)的） from me ．This
83．
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate
!
84．
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my
85．
being afraid of being wrong ．
試卷答案
1.’s
Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all
However
courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days
are
permitting
or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is
many
expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will
high
access
encourage more people to participate in sports.
2.
66. bad改為badly
67. 在up后加with
68. such改為so
69. 去掉a
70. 正確
71. hard改為harder
72. to改為on/upon
73.had改為has
74. works改為work
75. what改為how
3.
76．while → when。連詞的錯誤。從語境看，這里用when引導(dǎo)狀語從句表示“就在這時，這時突然。”
77．√
78．But → So。連詞的錯誤。語境表示順接的關(guān)系，用so：于是他們就沒停車。
79．has → had。時態(tài)的錯誤。這里敘述過去的事情，用過去完成時。
80．not后加been。語態(tài)的錯誤。這里顯然應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)表示被考慮。
81．that→what。連詞的錯誤。這里連詞引導(dǎo)賓語從句并在從句中做want的賓語，用what。
82．去掉in。動詞搭配的錯誤。fail直接接不定式做賓語。
83．immediately→ immediate。詞類的錯誤。用形容詞而不是副詞作定語。
84．women→woman。名詞的數(shù)的錯誤。這里應(yīng)該用單數(shù)名詞與語境保持一致。
85．express→expressing。非謂語動詞的錯誤。用過去進(jìn)行時的was doing表示當(dāng)時發(fā)生的動作。
4.
76．a(chǎn)m后加a7．a(chǎn)ve。時態(tài)的錯誤。這里應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時表示延續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的動作。
78．√
9．I we代詞的錯誤。語境表示作者和室友相處很好，用we。
80．happyhappily詞類的錯誤。用副詞而不是形容詞作狀語。
81．a(chǎn)nd。連詞的錯誤。用并列連詞表示陳述多個事實(shí)。
82．timetimes短語的錯誤。這里表示“幾次”，用many times。
83．leavingleft非謂語動詞的錯誤。語境表示被獨(dú)自一人撇在一邊時，用過去分詞做狀語。
84．去掉am5．getgetting。非謂語動詞的錯誤。look forward to接動名詞或名詞、代詞等做賓語。
5.
76．a(chǎn)gree 改為 disagree （一有人與我意見不一致）
77 attacking 改為 attacked （我感到受了攻擊或傷害）
78．right 改為 wrong （別人故意指出我錯了）
79．but 改為so （此處為因果關(guān)系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）
80．rise 改為 raise （“提高聲音”用raise 及物動詞）
81．正確。
82．去掉blame 后面的for ,
83．felt 改為 feeling （ 與前面的blaming 一致）
84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “這樣做”）85．dangerous 改為 danger （be in danger 為固定搭配）
6.
76．a(chǎn)gree 改為 disagree （一有人與我意見不一致）
77 attacking 改為 attacked （我感到受了攻擊或傷害）
78．right 改為 wrong （別人故意指出我錯了）
79．but 改為so （此處為因果關(guān)系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）
80．rise 改為 raise （“提高聲音”用raise 及物動詞）
81．正確。
82．去掉blame 后面的for ,
83．felt 改為 feeling （ 與前面的blaming 一致）
84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “這樣做”）
85．dangerous 改為 danger （be in danger 為固定搭配）
高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選：短文改錯
1.
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are
playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the
public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.
Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all
courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days
or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is
expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will
encourage more people to participate in sports.
2.Error correction
I'm a senior three student．I often do bad in myexams，so I have been trying to catch up the others．But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes
68
l cannot eat or sleep well at a night．I’m afraid thatI may get low marks in the tests again even if I work
70
hard than before． I have no courage to face low marks．I cannot fix my mind to my study, whenever I think of
72
this. It is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on
73
my school works. I’m feeling very sad. Would you
74
please tell me what I should deal with my worry?
75
3.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）;如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）則按下列情況改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
該行少一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在右邊橫線上寫出所加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正的詞。
注意：原行沒錯的不要改。
A married couple were in a car while the wife turned to
76．__________
her husband and asked, “Would you like to stop for coffee?” “No,
77．__________
thanks．” he answered truthfully．But they didn’t stop．However,
78．__________
the wife, who has indeed wanted to stop, became angry, because
79．_________
she felt her preference had not considered．The husband, seeing that
80．_________
his wife was angry, became frustrated．Why didn’t she just say that
81．_________
she wanted? Unfortunately, he failed in to see that his wife was
82．_________
asking the question, in order not to get an immediately decision, 83．_________
but rather to begin discussion．And the women didn’t realize that
84．_________
when her husband said no, he was just express his preference, not
85．_________
giving an order．
4.此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）;如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）則按下列情況改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
該行少一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在右邊橫線上寫出所加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正的詞。
注意：原行沒錯的不要改。
Dear Sir,
I am university student．I once thought life at the
76．_________
university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind．7．_________
I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 78．_________
into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and 9．_________
happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now． 0．_________
They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward 81．_________
me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 2．_________
I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving 3．_________
alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true
_________
friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon．5．_________
Yours,
Peter
5.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
For as long as I can remember, I have been very bad
at arguing with people ．As soon as someone agree
76．
with me, I get angry because I feel attacking, like the
77．
other person is out to show that I am right ．And for
78．
some reason , I hate being wrong! But my immediate
79．
reaction is to get very defensive．I rise my voice, and
80．
I end up saying something I later regret．Needless to say,
81．
the whole thing ends with me blaming for myself , and the
82．
other person felt alienated （疏遠(yuǎn)的） from me．This
83．
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate!
84．
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my
85．
being afraid of being wrong ．
6.
other person is out to show that I am right ．And for
78．
some reason , I hate being wrong ! But
my immediate
79．
reaction is to get very defensive ．I rise my voice , and
80．
I end up saying something I later regret ．Needless to say,
81．
the whole thing ends with me blaming
for myself , and the
82．
other person felt alienated （疏遠(yuǎn)的） from me ．This
83．
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate
!
84．
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my
85．
being afraid of being wrong ．
試卷答案
1.’s
Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all
However
courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days
are
permitting
or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is
many
expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will
high
access
encourage more people to participate in sports.
2.
66. bad改為badly
67. 在up后加with
68. such改為so
69. 去掉a
70. 正確
71. hard改為harder
72. to改為on/upon
73.had改為has
74. works改為work
75. what改為how
3.
76．while → when。連詞的錯誤。從語境看，這里用when引導(dǎo)狀語從句表示“就在這時，這時突然?！?/p>
77．√
78．But → So。連詞的錯誤。語境表示順接的關(guān)系，用so：于是他們就沒停車。
79．has → had。時態(tài)的錯誤。這里敘述過去的事情，用過去完成時。
80．not后加been。語態(tài)的錯誤。這里顯然應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)表示被考慮。
81．that→what。連詞的錯誤。這里連詞引導(dǎo)賓語從句并在從句中做want的賓語，用what。
82．去掉in。動詞搭配的錯誤。fail直接接不定式做賓語。
83．immediately→ immediate。詞類的錯誤。用形容詞而不是副詞作定語。
84．women→woman。名詞的數(shù)的錯誤。這里應(yīng)該用單數(shù)名詞與語境保持一致。
85．express→expressing。非謂語動詞的錯誤。用過去進(jìn)行時的was doing表示當(dāng)時發(fā)生的動作。
4.
76．a(chǎn)m后加a7．a(chǎn)ve。時態(tài)的錯誤。這里應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時表示延續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的動作。
78．√
9．I we代詞的錯誤。語境表示作者和室友相處很好，用we。
80．happyhappily詞類的錯誤。用副詞而不是形容詞作狀語。
81．a(chǎn)nd。連詞的錯誤。用并列連詞表示陳述多個事實(shí)。
82．timetimes短語的錯誤。這里表示“幾次”，用many times。
83．leavingleft非謂語動詞的錯誤。語境表示被獨(dú)自一人撇在一邊時，用過去分詞做狀語。
84．去掉am5．getgetting。非謂語動詞的錯誤。look forward to接動名詞或名詞、代詞等做賓語。
5.
76．a(chǎn)gree 改為 disagree （一有人與我意見不一致）
77 attacking 改為 attacked （我感到受了攻擊或傷害）
78．right 改為 wrong （別人故意指出我錯了）
79．but 改為so （此處為因果關(guān)系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）
80．rise 改為 raise （“提高聲音”用raise 及物動詞）
81．正確。
82．去掉blame 后面的for ,
83．felt 改為 feeling （ 與前面的blaming 一致）
84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “這樣做”）85．dangerous 改為 danger （be in danger 為固定搭配）
6.
76．a(chǎn)gree 改為 disagree （一有人與我意見不一致）
77 attacking 改為 attacked （我感到受了攻擊或傷害）
78．right 改為 wrong （別人故意指出我錯了）
79．but 改為so （此處為因果關(guān)系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）
80．rise 改為 raise （“提高聲音”用raise 及物動詞）
81．正確。
82．去掉blame 后面的for ,
83．felt 改為 feeling （ 與前面的blaming 一致）
84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “這樣做”）
85．dangerous 改為 danger （be in danger 為固定搭配）
