2024屆高考英語(yǔ)牛津譯林版一輪寫(xiě)作能力提升課件：第10講 常用時(shí)態(tài)在寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用

　　譯林卷區(qū)版

　　英語(yǔ) 第10講

　　常用時(shí)態(tài)在寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用 ——選準(zhǔn)時(shí)機(jī)，表達(dá)清晰 一、魔法導(dǎo)航 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤是學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題之一。在寫(xiě)作中選擇合適 的時(shí)態(tài)對(duì)于保證語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確和清晰起著非常重要的作用。 ?投“時(shí)”問(wèn)路 在寫(xiě)作中常用的時(shí)態(tài)主要有一般過(guò)去時(shí)、過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn) 行時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí),大家應(yīng)對(duì)這幾種時(shí)態(tài)的用法熟記于心并在 實(shí)踐中力求熟能生巧。 1.一般過(guò)去時(shí):表示過(guò)去某個(gè)時(shí)間發(fā)生的動(dòng)作、存在的狀態(tài)或過(guò)去習(xí)慣性的動(dòng) 作。一般過(guò)去時(shí)不強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作對(duì)現(xiàn)在的影響,只說(shuō)明過(guò)去的情況。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)On May 12, 2008,　????(一場(chǎng)地震幾乎破壞了學(xué)校里的所有東西), leaving the buildings badly-damaged.

　　?答案　 a earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school

　　(2)聽(tīng)到他說(shuō)的話(huà),我抑制不住自己的眼淚。(2024湖南) ??

　　?? ?答案　 When hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears.

　　2.過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí):表示過(guò)去某時(shí)正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Last Monday,　????(我們正在上語(yǔ)文課) when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.

　　?答案　we were having our Chinese class (2)老師進(jìn)入教室的時(shí)候,我正在玩電腦游戲。(2024重慶) ?

　　??? ?答案　 When the teacher entered the classroom, I was playing computer games.

　　3.一般現(xiàn)在時(shí):表示現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常、反復(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作、存在的狀態(tài)或習(xí)慣性的動(dòng) 作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)But I have some difficulties with note-taking and　????(我不知道如 何使用圖書(shū)館).

　　?答案　 I have no idea how to use the library (2)在我們的文化中它是一個(gè)為老人設(shè)立的日子。(2024課標(biāo)全國(guó)Ⅱ) ?

　　??? ?答案　 It is a day for the elderly in our culture.

　　4.現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí):表示現(xiàn)在或當(dāng)前一段時(shí)間正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作。 ?雕詞琢句 I　????(現(xiàn)在給你寫(xiě)信) to draw your attention to some improper behav- ior among us students: littering and scribbling.

　　?答案　 am writing 5.現(xiàn)在完成時(shí):用來(lái)表示現(xiàn)在之前已發(fā)生過(guò)或完成的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài),但其結(jié)果卻 和現(xiàn)在有聯(lián)系,也就是說(shuō),動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)發(fā)生在過(guò)去但它的影響現(xiàn)在還存在。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Years of school life 　????(已經(jīng)教給了我很多東西), of which team- work is the most important for me.

　　?答案　has taught me a lot of things

　　(2)在幾項(xiàng)英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)中,我已經(jīng)成功地向她伸出援手。(2024陜西) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activi ties.

　　6.一般將來(lái)時(shí):表示將來(lái)某一時(shí)刻要發(fā)生的動(dòng)作或存在的狀態(tài),或?qū)?lái)某一段 時(shí)間內(nèi)經(jīng)常發(fā)生的動(dòng)作或存在的狀態(tài)。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)We are very glad to know that　????(你將在6月26日來(lái)我們學(xué)校), and now it's my pleasure to introduce our school to you.

　　?答案　 you'll come to our school on June 26th (2)今年七月參加夏令營(yíng)的時(shí)候我們將帶著這些書(shū)到你們學(xué)校。(2024天津) ?

　　??? ?答案　 We will take the books to your school when participating in the summer

　　camp this July. ?時(shí)態(tài)選秀 盡管時(shí)態(tài)的使用千變?nèi)f化,但在書(shū)面表達(dá)中卻“有章可循、有律可遵”,現(xiàn)總 結(jié)如下: 1.敘事主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Last weekend,　????(我父母和我一塊兒到桂林去旅游),where we spent a happy time together and learned more about local traditions and culture.

　　?答案　my parents as well as I went on a trip to Guilin 2.表述觀(guān)點(diǎn)或議論文中主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Personally, 　????(我更喜歡在團(tuán)隊(duì)里工作), which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.

　　?答案　I prefer to work in a team 3.說(shuō)明文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Every student can do something for our environment in daily life. For example, remember to turn off the lights in time 　????(晚上在你離開(kāi)教室之前). ?答案　before you leave the classroom in the evening

　　4.介紹客觀(guān)情況常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 　????(48%的男孩子選擇體育明星). ?答案　48% of the boys choose sports stars

　　二、學(xué)以致用 1.完美文章 根據(jù)所給提示完成下面短文,注意時(shí)態(tài)。 Located beside the Yangtze River,my hometown is a beautiful place now.In the past,(1)????(它是個(gè)貧窮的村莊,在那里人們過(guò)著艱難的生 活). However,(2)????(在過(guò)去的20年里發(fā)生了巨大的變化) here, thanks to the good policy of the Party.To begin with,a large number of new hous- es have been set up which are equipped with modern appliances such as comput- ers,fridges,TV sets,washing machines and so on.What's more,there is a large su- permarket in it,(3)????(那里有人們需要的各種各樣的商品). Much to our delight,(4)????(一所更大的學(xué)校正在建設(shè)當(dāng)中). There is no doubt that (5)????(孩子們將會(huì)接受更好的教育)by the time it has been put into use,because lots of modern teaching facilities will be used in the new school,(6)????(它們將幫助老師使課堂變得生 動(dòng)有趣). Such is my hometown (7)????(在這里所有的人們正過(guò)著幸福 的生活).And I am sure(8)????(它將會(huì)變成一個(gè)更加迷人和舒 適的地方) to live in with the development of economy and society as well. ?答案 (1)it was a poor village where people led a hard life (2)in the past twenty years great changes have taken place

　　(3)where there are varieties of goods that people need (4)a much bigger school is being built (5)the children will receive a better education (6)which will help teachers make their classes lively and interesting (7)where all the people are living a happy life (8)it will become a more charming and comfortable place

　　2.話(huà)題寫(xiě)作 [本期話(huà)題]　書(shū)信交流 [寫(xiě)作要求]　正確使用時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行短文寫(xiě)作。 根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。 1.我是四川的一名學(xué)生李華,從小就是一名大熊貓愛(ài)好者; 2.三年前,我很高興得知大熊貓白云生了它的女兒蘇林; 3.在你們網(wǎng)站上我一直關(guān)注著蘇林的成長(zhǎng); 4.得知它在你們動(dòng)物園生活得非常好,我很高興; 5.明年夏天我去美國(guó)的時(shí)候要去動(dòng)物園看它; 6.非常感謝你們?yōu)檎疹櫞笮茇埜冻龅膭趧?dòng)。???

　　答案 One possible version: I am Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I have been a panda lover since I was a child. Three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I have been watching her growth on your website. When learning Sulin is living well in your zoo now, I am very happy. I will visit her when I go to America next summer.

　　Thank you very much for your caring for the pandas.

　　三、美文賞讀 (2024山東) 某英文報(bào)社組織題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng),你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下 面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文,內(nèi)容須包括:1.該諺語(yǔ)的含 義;2.體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　?、赪here there's a will,there's a way. 注意: 1.詞數(shù)120~150; 2.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。 參考詞匯: 諺語(yǔ) proverb

　　[我來(lái)試寫(xiě)]??

　　??? ?答案 One possible version: Where there is a will,there is a way. I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came in- to the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard. I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our

　　goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them. Once I was not good at English.I didn't know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don't lose heart.Remember: where there is a will,there is a way.” Suddenly,I was reminded of the sentence on the blackboard. From then on,I had worked hard on my English and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot,and more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】 本文根據(jù)行文的需要,恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài),準(zhǔn)確地 表達(dá)了句意,出色地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。

　　譯林卷區(qū)版

　　英語(yǔ) 第10講

　　常用時(shí)態(tài)在寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用 ——選準(zhǔn)時(shí)機(jī)，表達(dá)清晰 一、魔法導(dǎo)航 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤是學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題之一。在寫(xiě)作中選擇合適 的時(shí)態(tài)對(duì)于保證語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確和清晰起著非常重要的作用。 ?投“時(shí)”問(wèn)路 在寫(xiě)作中常用的時(shí)態(tài)主要有一般過(guò)去時(shí)、過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn) 行時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí),大家應(yīng)對(duì)這幾種時(shí)態(tài)的用法熟記于心并在 實(shí)踐中力求熟能生巧。 1.一般過(guò)去時(shí):表示過(guò)去某個(gè)時(shí)間發(fā)生的動(dòng)作、存在的狀態(tài)或過(guò)去習(xí)慣性的動(dòng) 作。一般過(guò)去時(shí)不強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作對(duì)現(xiàn)在的影響,只說(shuō)明過(guò)去的情況。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)On May 12, 2008,　????(一場(chǎng)地震幾乎破壞了學(xué)校里的所有東西), leaving the buildings badly-damaged.

　　?答案　 a earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school

　　(2)聽(tīng)到他說(shuō)的話(huà),我抑制不住自己的眼淚。(2024湖南) ??

　　?? ?答案　 When hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears.

　　2.過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí):表示過(guò)去某時(shí)正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Last Monday,　????(我們正在上語(yǔ)文課) when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.

　　?答案　we were having our Chinese class (2)老師進(jìn)入教室的時(shí)候,我正在玩電腦游戲。(2024重慶) ?

　　??? ?答案　 When the teacher entered the classroom, I was playing computer games.

　　3.一般現(xiàn)在時(shí):表示現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常、反復(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作、存在的狀態(tài)或習(xí)慣性的動(dòng) 作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)But I have some difficulties with note-taking and　????(我不知道如 何使用圖書(shū)館).

　　?答案　 I have no idea how to use the library (2)在我們的文化中它是一個(gè)為老人設(shè)立的日子。(2024課標(biāo)全國(guó)Ⅱ) ?

　　??? ?答案　 It is a day for the elderly in our culture.

　　4.現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí):表示現(xiàn)在或當(dāng)前一段時(shí)間正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作。 ?雕詞琢句 I　????(現(xiàn)在給你寫(xiě)信) to draw your attention to some improper behav- ior among us students: littering and scribbling.

　　?答案　 am writing 5.現(xiàn)在完成時(shí):用來(lái)表示現(xiàn)在之前已發(fā)生過(guò)或完成的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài),但其結(jié)果卻 和現(xiàn)在有聯(lián)系,也就是說(shuō),動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)發(fā)生在過(guò)去但它的影響現(xiàn)在還存在。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Years of school life 　????(已經(jīng)教給了我很多東西), of which team- work is the most important for me.

　　?答案　has taught me a lot of things

　　(2)在幾項(xiàng)英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)中,我已經(jīng)成功地向她伸出援手。(2024陜西) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activi ties.

　　6.一般將來(lái)時(shí):表示將來(lái)某一時(shí)刻要發(fā)生的動(dòng)作或存在的狀態(tài),或?qū)?lái)某一段 時(shí)間內(nèi)經(jīng)常發(fā)生的動(dòng)作或存在的狀態(tài)。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)We are very glad to know that　????(你將在6月26日來(lái)我們學(xué)校), and now it's my pleasure to introduce our school to you.

　　?答案　 you'll come to our school on June 26th (2)今年七月參加夏令營(yíng)的時(shí)候我們將帶著這些書(shū)到你們學(xué)校。(2024天津) ?

　　??? ?答案　 We will take the books to your school when participating in the summer

　　camp this July. ?時(shí)態(tài)選秀 盡管時(shí)態(tài)的使用千變?nèi)f化,但在書(shū)面表達(dá)中卻“有章可循、有律可遵”,現(xiàn)總 結(jié)如下: 1.敘事主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Last weekend,　????(我父母和我一塊兒到桂林去旅游),where we spent a happy time together and learned more about local traditions and culture.

　　?答案　my parents as well as I went on a trip to Guilin 2.表述觀(guān)點(diǎn)或議論文中主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Personally, 　????(我更喜歡在團(tuán)隊(duì)里工作), which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.

　　?答案　I prefer to work in a team 3.說(shuō)明文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 Every student can do something for our environment in daily life. For example, remember to turn off the lights in time 　????(晚上在你離開(kāi)教室之前). ?答案　before you leave the classroom in the evening

　　4.介紹客觀(guān)情況常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?雕詞琢句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 　????(48%的男孩子選擇體育明星). ?答案　48% of the boys choose sports stars

　　二、學(xué)以致用 1.完美文章 根據(jù)所給提示完成下面短文,注意時(shí)態(tài)。 Located beside the Yangtze River,my hometown is a beautiful place now.In the past,(1)????(它是個(gè)貧窮的村莊,在那里人們過(guò)著艱難的生 活). However,(2)????(在過(guò)去的20年里發(fā)生了巨大的變化) here, thanks to the good policy of the Party.To begin with,a large number of new hous- es have been set up which are equipped with modern appliances such as comput- ers,fridges,TV sets,washing machines and so on.What's more,there is a large su- permarket in it,(3)????(那里有人們需要的各種各樣的商品). Much to our delight,(4)????(一所更大的學(xué)校正在建設(shè)當(dāng)中). There is no doubt that (5)????(孩子們將會(huì)接受更好的教育)by the time it has been put into use,because lots of modern teaching facilities will be used in the new school,(6)????(它們將幫助老師使課堂變得生 動(dòng)有趣). Such is my hometown (7)????(在這里所有的人們正過(guò)著幸福 的生活).And I am sure(8)????(它將會(huì)變成一個(gè)更加迷人和舒 適的地方) to live in with the development of economy and society as well. ?答案 (1)it was a poor village where people led a hard life (2)in the past twenty years great changes have taken place

　　(3)where there are varieties of goods that people need (4)a much bigger school is being built (5)the children will receive a better education (6)which will help teachers make their classes lively and interesting (7)where all the people are living a happy life (8)it will become a more charming and comfortable place

　　2.話(huà)題寫(xiě)作 [本期話(huà)題]　書(shū)信交流 [寫(xiě)作要求]　正確使用時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行短文寫(xiě)作。 根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。 1.我是四川的一名學(xué)生李華,從小就是一名大熊貓愛(ài)好者; 2.三年前,我很高興得知大熊貓白云生了它的女兒蘇林; 3.在你們網(wǎng)站上我一直關(guān)注著蘇林的成長(zhǎng); 4.得知它在你們動(dòng)物園生活得非常好,我很高興; 5.明年夏天我去美國(guó)的時(shí)候要去動(dòng)物園看它; 6.非常感謝你們?yōu)檎疹櫞笮茇埜冻龅膭趧?dòng)。???

　　答案 One possible version: I am Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I have been a panda lover since I was a child. Three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I have been watching her growth on your website. When learning Sulin is living well in your zoo now, I am very happy. I will visit her when I go to America next summer.

　　Thank you very much for your caring for the pandas.

　　三、美文賞讀 (2024山東) 某英文報(bào)社組織題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng),你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下 面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文,內(nèi)容須包括:1.該諺語(yǔ)的含 義;2.體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　?、赪here there's a will,there's a way. 注意: 1.詞數(shù)120~150; 2.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。 參考詞匯: 諺語(yǔ) proverb

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　　??? ?答案 One possible version: Where there is a will,there is a way. I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came in- to the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard. I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our

　　goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them. Once I was not good at English.I didn't know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don't lose heart.Remember: where there is a will,there is a way.” Suddenly,I was reminded of the sentence on the blackboard. From then on,I had worked hard on my English and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot,and more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】 本文根據(jù)行文的需要,恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài),準(zhǔn)確地 表達(dá)了句意,出色地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。