GMAT作文機經(jīng) 公司搬去helios

　　現(xiàn)在的時間是復(fù)習(xí)GMAT考試作文的時間，同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該抓緊時間去復(fù)習(xí)GMAT作文。機經(jīng)是復(fù)習(xí)GMAT寫作的重要材料，小編這里帶來的是最新的GMAT作文機經(jīng)：公司搬去helios。

　　公司搬去helios

　　V1 corporations look to helios, helios有較低的失業(yè)率blabla,然后羅列了helios的優(yōu)點包括歷史悠久 技術(shù)先進(jìn)什么什么的

　　V2一個城市叫Heliod, 說是all business should go there for opportunities and open new plant云云，很久以前寫過，很好考到古估計。reason有：

　　1. 是周邊城市中unimployment最低的，even in economic crisis

　　2. has provided more manufacturing jobs than its proportion in the reagion in the past

　　3. 該市正在吸引high tech, innovation business

　　考古

　　V1 某地B 失業(yè)率一直比整個region低，然后historically has provided more than its share of regional manufacturing jobs. In addition, B is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting more 高科技創(chuàng)新公司。所以公司should look at B when 尋找新商業(yè)機會或者選址 ---never267

　　V2 一個regional life的magazine的article里面有段話，說corporation都應(yīng)該去Helios 這個城市找new business opportunity或者new location。因為之前recession的時候Helios的unemployment rate was lower than regional average。且過去很多年Helios 都是industrial 中心。說現(xiàn)在Helios為了expand economy base要引進(jìn)research and development new technology的公司。

　　樓主由于昨兒沒寂靜 嚇得凌晨2am才休息，本來就才6小時基本上沒睡著。?？催@個題目比較暈乎。。。只寫了時間上的還有說unemployment rate 關(guān)是否適合new business 啥事。很可能一開始unemployment rate就很低，所以即使這個城市其實失業(yè)率increase sharply最后還是低于average，但是實際上整個經(jīng)濟已經(jīng)不好了。而這個城市之所以要招商很可能要么發(fā)展到了瓶頸要么已經(jīng)開始下坡了，所以才要招商。最后建議好歹給一點關(guān)于這個城市未來發(fā)展預(yù)測的數(shù)據(jù)。

　　V3 The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.

　　Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helioss unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the regions manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.

　　參考范文

　　In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the regions manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, efforts are currently underway to expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.

　　To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, its unlikely that Helios will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.

　　Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies seeking to relocate.

　　In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking new business opportunities to choose Helios.

　　現(xiàn)在的時間是復(fù)習(xí)GMAT考試作文的時間，同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該抓緊時間去復(fù)習(xí)GMAT作文。機經(jīng)是復(fù)習(xí)GMAT寫作的重要材料，小編這里帶來的是最新的GMAT作文機經(jīng)：公司搬去helios。

　　公司搬去helios

　　V1 corporations look to helios, helios有較低的失業(yè)率blabla,然后羅列了helios的優(yōu)點包括歷史悠久 技術(shù)先進(jìn)什么什么的

　　V2一個城市叫Heliod, 說是all business should go there for opportunities and open new plant云云，很久以前寫過，很好考到古估計。reason有：

　　1. 是周邊城市中unimployment最低的，even in economic crisis

　　2. has provided more manufacturing jobs than its proportion in the reagion in the past

　　3. 該市正在吸引high tech, innovation business

　　考古

　　V1 某地B 失業(yè)率一直比整個region低，然后historically has provided more than its share of regional manufacturing jobs. In addition, B is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting more 高科技創(chuàng)新公司。所以公司should look at B when 尋找新商業(yè)機會或者選址 ---never267

　　V2 一個regional life的magazine的article里面有段話，說corporation都應(yīng)該去Helios 這個城市找new business opportunity或者new location。因為之前recession的時候Helios的unemployment rate was lower than regional average。且過去很多年Helios 都是industrial 中心。說現(xiàn)在Helios為了expand economy base要引進(jìn)research and development new technology的公司。

　　樓主由于昨兒沒寂靜 嚇得凌晨2am才休息，本來就才6小時基本上沒睡著。。看這個題目比較暈乎。。。只寫了時間上的還有說unemployment rate 關(guān)是否適合new business 啥事。很可能一開始unemployment rate就很低，所以即使這個城市其實失業(yè)率increase sharply最后還是低于average，但是實際上整個經(jīng)濟已經(jīng)不好了。而這個城市之所以要招商很可能要么發(fā)展到了瓶頸要么已經(jīng)開始下坡了，所以才要招商。最后建議好歹給一點關(guān)于這個城市未來發(fā)展預(yù)測的數(shù)據(jù)。

　　V3 The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.

　　Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helioss unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the regions manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.

　　參考范文

　　In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the regions manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, efforts are currently underway to expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.

　　To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, its unlikely that Helios will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.

　　Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies seeking to relocate.

　　In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking new business opportunities to choose Helios.