2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師點(diǎn)評
導(dǎo)語:高考英語作文向來都是高考考生認(rèn)為的一大難點(diǎn),滿分更少極為不容易,小編為考生們準(zhǔn)備了大量的高考滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評,希望大家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí),對高考沖刺階段的英語提分有所幫助。
【試題回放】
假定你是李華,亞洲冬季運(yùn)動會將在你居住的地方舉辦,現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者,你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:1.個人情況:年齡,性別,學(xué)歷 2.個人條件:英語好,愛好體育,善于交際,樂于助人,熟悉本地情況 3.承諾:提供最佳服務(wù)
注意:詞數(shù)100左右,開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;生詞:申請apply (v. ), application (n.),志愿者volunteer
Dear Sir / Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章寫得非常流暢,把握了所有要點(diǎn),同時以我為中心,詳細(xì)說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合,以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng),這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分,具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用也不錯。
導(dǎo)語:高考英語作文向來都是高考考生認(rèn)為的一大難點(diǎn),滿分更少極為不容易,小編為考生們準(zhǔn)備了大量的高考滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評,希望大家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí),對高考沖刺階段的英語提分有所幫助。
【試題回放】
假定你是李華,亞洲冬季運(yùn)動會將在你居住的地方舉辦,現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者,你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:1.個人情況:年齡,性別,學(xué)歷 2.個人條件:英語好,愛好體育,善于交際,樂于助人,熟悉本地情況 3.承諾:提供最佳服務(wù)
注意:詞數(shù)100左右,開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;生詞:申請apply (v. ), application (n.),志愿者volunteer
Dear Sir / Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章寫得非常流暢,把握了所有要點(diǎn),同時以我為中心,詳細(xì)說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合,以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng),這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分,具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用也不錯。