雅思寫作改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（一）
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
參考答案
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
錯(cuò)誤: and并列連接兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該是平行結(jié)構(gòu)。所以attempts應(yīng)該改為attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
錯(cuò)誤: 培養(yǎng)良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
錯(cuò)誤: For a group of remaining in existence應(yīng)該是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一個(gè)目的狀語(yǔ)。produces應(yīng)該是produce，因?yàn)樵诓迦胝Z(yǔ)in the long run的前邊有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
錯(cuò)誤: For a result of應(yīng)該是As a result of.介詞搭配不當(dāng).
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
錯(cuò)誤: should be encourage應(yīng)該是should be encouraged,情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài). dependence in應(yīng)該是dependence on, 介詞搭配不當(dāng).
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
錯(cuò)誤: their advocates應(yīng)該是its advocates. Its在這里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
錯(cuò)誤: efficiently services應(yīng)該是efficient services. 這也是許多學(xué)生經(jīng)常犯的一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤。副詞不能修飾名詞，必須得改為形容詞。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
錯(cuò)誤: organizing around a basically private-enterprise應(yīng)該是organized around a basically private-enterprise.這里應(yīng)該是過去分詞來做一個(gè)伴隨狀語(yǔ)，而不應(yīng)該是現(xiàn)在分詞，因?yàn)樗侵髡Z(yǔ)的承受者。in that應(yīng)該是in which.因?yàn)橹挥衖n which才能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。in which=where, 在引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，后面需要加上一個(gè)完整句。而in that只能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)從句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
錯(cuò)誤: which應(yīng)該是that.與前面的it is構(gòu)成一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。強(qiáng)調(diào)原句中的主語(yǔ)。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
錯(cuò)誤: one information應(yīng)該是one piece of information. 因?yàn)閕nformation是不可數(shù)名詞，前面必須加量詞修飾。
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
參考答案
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
錯(cuò)誤: and并列連接兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該是平行結(jié)構(gòu)。所以attempts應(yīng)該改為attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
錯(cuò)誤: 培養(yǎng)良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
錯(cuò)誤: For a group of remaining in existence應(yīng)該是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一個(gè)目的狀語(yǔ)。produces應(yīng)該是produce，因?yàn)樵诓迦胝Z(yǔ)in the long run的前邊有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
錯(cuò)誤: For a result of應(yīng)該是As a result of.介詞搭配不當(dāng).
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
錯(cuò)誤: should be encourage應(yīng)該是should be encouraged,情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài). dependence in應(yīng)該是dependence on, 介詞搭配不當(dāng).
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
錯(cuò)誤: their advocates應(yīng)該是its advocates. Its在這里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
錯(cuò)誤: efficiently services應(yīng)該是efficient services. 這也是許多學(xué)生經(jīng)常犯的一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤。副詞不能修飾名詞，必須得改為形容詞。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
錯(cuò)誤: organizing around a basically private-enterprise應(yīng)該是organized around a basically private-enterprise.這里應(yīng)該是過去分詞來做一個(gè)伴隨狀語(yǔ)，而不應(yīng)該是現(xiàn)在分詞，因?yàn)樗侵髡Z(yǔ)的承受者。in that應(yīng)該是in which.因?yàn)橹挥衖n which才能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。in which=where, 在引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，后面需要加上一個(gè)完整句。而in that只能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)從句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
錯(cuò)誤: which應(yīng)該是that.與前面的it is構(gòu)成一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。強(qiáng)調(diào)原句中的主語(yǔ)。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
錯(cuò)誤: one information應(yīng)該是one piece of information. 因?yàn)閕nformation是不可數(shù)名詞，前面必須加量詞修飾。
