雅思寫作之英式思維范文
雅思寫作之英式思維范文
英國作者的Why cycle？
There are many good reasons to cycle. （第一句話就是主題句，西方人的習(xí)慣）Cycling is the most efficient means of getting around London.（好處之一） Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or less and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.（進(jìn)一步解釋，加強說服力）。Not only is cycling good for you, it is also fun and available to all（好處之二）. It is a chance to get out of the house or workplace, to be active and to be sociable（解釋）. Getting a bike neednt be expensive and upkeep is low cost and easy. （好處之三，這三個好處只是泛泛說明，一般是前面的論點比后面的更重要，所以句子一個比一個短））
Save money（開始論述第一點）
Using a bike to replace your regular form of transport is a great way to save money（主句，符合論點）. Its well documented that cycling is the best value way to travel around London（引用統(tǒng)計結(jié)果，有絕對說服力） . Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you dont have all the added costs of fuel, Vehicle Excise Duty and parking（比較法，舉例說明怎樣省錢）.
Save time（論點二）
For a typical London journey, cycling is faster than the car, public transport, taxis or walking（主句，符合論點）. Remember that cycling is a door to door service. On a bicycle you can easily cover five miles in half an hour and be confident that youll arrive on time（解釋如何省時間）. Car or bus journeys take longer and depend on traffic, or irregular bus services（搭汽車時間長，從反面解釋騎自行車省時間）. For longer trips, you can combine bike and public transport: leaving your bike at the station or sometimes taking it on the train/tube at off-peak times. See the LCC information booklet Transporting Your Bicycle for further information.（進(jìn)一步解釋，幫你解決你有可能遇到的問題，打消你欲辯論的想法）
Become healthier（論點三）
Cycling is an excellent way to get fit and live longer（主句，符合論點）. By riding a bike youll be incorporating exercise into your daily life. Remember that to stay healthy you need 30 minutes of exercise per day: that 15 minute cycle to work is the perfect prescription for losing weight and getting fit（解釋。口氣不是說教，而像是你的保健顧問，說服力強）.
By cycling you cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. The benefits, says the British Medical Association, far outweigh any risks associated with cycling.（論據(jù)二）
By getting fitter and escaping the frustrations of traffic jams and tube and train delays you will also reduce your stress levels and enjoy your day more. （論據(jù)三）
It has been shown that by cycling you will breathe fewer fumes than those in cars or buses, so are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases（論據(jù)四）.
雅思寫作之英式思維范文
英國作者的Why cycle？
There are many good reasons to cycle. （第一句話就是主題句，西方人的習(xí)慣）Cycling is the most efficient means of getting around London.（好處之一） Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or less and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.（進(jìn)一步解釋，加強說服力）。Not only is cycling good for you, it is also fun and available to all（好處之二）. It is a chance to get out of the house or workplace, to be active and to be sociable（解釋）. Getting a bike neednt be expensive and upkeep is low cost and easy. （好處之三，這三個好處只是泛泛說明，一般是前面的論點比后面的更重要，所以句子一個比一個短））
Save money（開始論述第一點）
Using a bike to replace your regular form of transport is a great way to save money（主句，符合論點）. Its well documented that cycling is the best value way to travel around London（引用統(tǒng)計結(jié)果，有絕對說服力） . Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you dont have all the added costs of fuel, Vehicle Excise Duty and parking（比較法，舉例說明怎樣省錢）.
Save time（論點二）
For a typical London journey, cycling is faster than the car, public transport, taxis or walking（主句，符合論點）. Remember that cycling is a door to door service. On a bicycle you can easily cover five miles in half an hour and be confident that youll arrive on time（解釋如何省時間）. Car or bus journeys take longer and depend on traffic, or irregular bus services（搭汽車時間長，從反面解釋騎自行車省時間）. For longer trips, you can combine bike and public transport: leaving your bike at the station or sometimes taking it on the train/tube at off-peak times. See the LCC information booklet Transporting Your Bicycle for further information.（進(jìn)一步解釋，幫你解決你有可能遇到的問題，打消你欲辯論的想法）
Become healthier（論點三）
Cycling is an excellent way to get fit and live longer（主句，符合論點）. By riding a bike youll be incorporating exercise into your daily life. Remember that to stay healthy you need 30 minutes of exercise per day: that 15 minute cycle to work is the perfect prescription for losing weight and getting fit（解釋?？跉獠皇钦f教，而像是你的保健顧問，說服力強）.
By cycling you cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. The benefits, says the British Medical Association, far outweigh any risks associated with cycling.（論據(jù)二）
By getting fitter and escaping the frustrations of traffic jams and tube and train delays you will also reduce your stress levels and enjoy your day more. （論據(jù)三）
It has been shown that by cycling you will breathe fewer fumes than those in cars or buses, so are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases（論據(jù)四）.
