2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)北師大版寫作專題講座課件:第二講 簡單句的轉(zhuǎn)換與訓(xùn)練
在一篇短文中,如果句子結(jié)構(gòu)要么是“主謂賓”,要么是“主系表”,則顯得很單調(diào),讀起來乏味。若對簡單句進行一下轉(zhuǎn)換,使其主語靈活,句子結(jié)構(gòu)活潑,則給人的感覺就大不一樣。 簡單句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換有下面三種方法: 一、轉(zhuǎn)換句子結(jié)構(gòu) [例] 李東住在南方。他的家鄉(xiāng)經(jīng)常下雨。 一般: Li Dong lives in the south.It often rains in his hometown. 較好: Li Dong is from the south.There is a lot of rain in his hometown. [分析] “一般表達”中的兩個句子均是“主謂”結(jié)構(gòu),比較單調(diào)。把它們分別轉(zhuǎn)換為“主系表”結(jié)構(gòu)和there be句型后,句子就顯得比較活潑。 [例] 你每天幫我學(xué)英語。你太好了! 一般: You help me study English every day. You are very kind.
較好: It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.
較好: How kind of you to help me learn English every day!
[分析] “一般表達”句子之間的關(guān)系松散,轉(zhuǎn)換為it作形式主語或感嘆句后句子讀起來很流暢。 二、轉(zhuǎn)換句型
寫作中常用于轉(zhuǎn)換的三個重點句型: 1.there be句型 there be句型也是簡單句中的一種常用句型,在作文中經(jīng)常使用。在there be句型中,有時there be還可以換用there seems/seemed to be(似乎有),there happened to be(碰巧有),there may/might be(也許有),there must be(肯定有),there can't be(不可能有),there ought to/should be(應(yīng)該有)等。 我家有五口人。 There are five people in my family. 操場上碰巧有很多人。 There happened to be a lot of people on the playground. 2.感嘆句 感嘆句是作文中很有用的一種句型,常見的感嘆句有兩種: [句型1] What+(冠詞)+形容詞+名詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號 [句型2] How+形容詞或副詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號 What an interesting film (it is)! =How interesting a film (it is)! 3.強調(diào)句型 強調(diào)句型也是作文中常用的一種句型,強調(diào)句型的結(jié)構(gòu)是: It is/was+被強調(diào)部分+that/who+原句其他部分。 I met my friend in the street yesterday.
→It was I who/that met my friend in the street yesterday. (強調(diào)主語)
→It was my friend that I met in the street yesterday. (強調(diào)賓語)
→It was in the street that I met my friend yesterday. (強調(diào)地點狀語) →It was yesterday that I met my friend in the street. (強調(diào)時間狀語)
注意:強調(diào)時間和地點時,不能用when或where,要用that。 三、轉(zhuǎn)換詞語
[例] 杰克是我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生。他學(xué)習(xí)特別努力。 一般: Jack studies in our school. He studies very hard. 較好: Jack studies in our school. He works hard at his lessons. [分析] “一般表達”中的謂語重復(fù)使用study,顯得呆板。詞語轉(zhuǎn)換后,句子就“活”起來了,讀起來有滋有味。 [例] 媽媽匆匆忙忙去上班,連早餐都沒吃。 一般:Mother went to work in a hurry. She didn't have breakfast.
較好:Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfast.
[分析] “一般表達”中的兩個簡單句之間關(guān)系松散,使用介詞短語進行轉(zhuǎn)換后使句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,讀起來一氣呵成。 * *
在一篇短文中,如果句子結(jié)構(gòu)要么是“主謂賓”,要么是“主系表”,則顯得很單調(diào),讀起來乏味。若對簡單句進行一下轉(zhuǎn)換,使其主語靈活,句子結(jié)構(gòu)活潑,則給人的感覺就大不一樣。 簡單句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換有下面三種方法: 一、轉(zhuǎn)換句子結(jié)構(gòu) [例] 李東住在南方。他的家鄉(xiāng)經(jīng)常下雨。 一般: Li Dong lives in the south.It often rains in his hometown. 較好: Li Dong is from the south.There is a lot of rain in his hometown. [分析] “一般表達”中的兩個句子均是“主謂”結(jié)構(gòu),比較單調(diào)。把它們分別轉(zhuǎn)換為“主系表”結(jié)構(gòu)和there be句型后,句子就顯得比較活潑。 [例] 你每天幫我學(xué)英語。你太好了! 一般: You help me study English every day. You are very kind.
較好: It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.
較好: How kind of you to help me learn English every day!
[分析] “一般表達”句子之間的關(guān)系松散,轉(zhuǎn)換為it作形式主語或感嘆句后句子讀起來很流暢。 二、轉(zhuǎn)換句型
寫作中常用于轉(zhuǎn)換的三個重點句型: 1.there be句型 there be句型也是簡單句中的一種常用句型,在作文中經(jīng)常使用。在there be句型中,有時there be還可以換用there seems/seemed to be(似乎有),there happened to be(碰巧有),there may/might be(也許有),there must be(肯定有),there can't be(不可能有),there ought to/should be(應(yīng)該有)等。 我家有五口人。 There are five people in my family. 操場上碰巧有很多人。 There happened to be a lot of people on the playground. 2.感嘆句 感嘆句是作文中很有用的一種句型,常見的感嘆句有兩種: [句型1] What+(冠詞)+形容詞+名詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號 [句型2] How+形容詞或副詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號 What an interesting film (it is)! =How interesting a film (it is)! 3.強調(diào)句型 強調(diào)句型也是作文中常用的一種句型,強調(diào)句型的結(jié)構(gòu)是: It is/was+被強調(diào)部分+that/who+原句其他部分。 I met my friend in the street yesterday.
→It was I who/that met my friend in the street yesterday. (強調(diào)主語)
→It was my friend that I met in the street yesterday. (強調(diào)賓語)
→It was in the street that I met my friend yesterday. (強調(diào)地點狀語) →It was yesterday that I met my friend in the street. (強調(diào)時間狀語)
注意:強調(diào)時間和地點時,不能用when或where,要用that。 三、轉(zhuǎn)換詞語
[例] 杰克是我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生。他學(xué)習(xí)特別努力。 一般: Jack studies in our school. He studies very hard. 較好: Jack studies in our school. He works hard at his lessons. [分析] “一般表達”中的謂語重復(fù)使用study,顯得呆板。詞語轉(zhuǎn)換后,句子就“活”起來了,讀起來有滋有味。 [例] 媽媽匆匆忙忙去上班,連早餐都沒吃。 一般:Mother went to work in a hurry. She didn't have breakfast.
較好:Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfast.
[分析] “一般表達”中的兩個簡單句之間關(guān)系松散,使用介詞短語進行轉(zhuǎn)換后使句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,讀起來一氣呵成。 * *