2024屆高考英語寫作分類掌握復(fù)習(xí)課件：17 主題句展開模式（新人教版）

　　* 主題：自信的重要性 ( 觀點(diǎn)論證)

　　[提出觀點(diǎn)] Self-confidence plays an important role in anything we do. Just as Edison said, self-confidence is the first secret of success.

　　[論證]It is clear that self-confidence means trust in one’s abilities.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　(正面論證) If you are full of self-confidence, it will bring you creative power to play， arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties; as a result, your dreams will come true. (反面論證) On the contrary, if you have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything. Failure will be following you. It turns out that all your plans fall through. [論證] No one can deny another fact that self-confidence gives you light when you are in the dark and encouragement when you are discouraged. For example, the secret of Madam Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular.

　　[得出結(jié)論] From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have self-confidence if you want to achieve anything.

　　在根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫好段落主題句后, 就要圍繞主題句展開。展開的方式主要有：

　　靈活運(yùn)用超級(jí)模仿

　　1.正反式。

　　如就談?wù)\信與人生的關(guān)系這個(gè)話題, 可以利用正反式的邏輯組織材料: 誠信對(duì)人生的重要性; 沒有誠信的人會(huì)怎樣。

　　It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win respect from others, which is of great importance in our study and daily life, let alone in the business world. However, a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is, dishonesty will ruin his future. 2.遞進(jìn)式。

　　如談?wù)摗皟和逝值牟涣加绊憽? 可以從身體上進(jìn)而從精神上談?wù)摲逝謱?duì)兒童造成的不良影響。

　　As far as we know, obese children tend

　　to eat a lot but they take little exercise, as a result of which they often fall ill easily. Besides, because of their appearance, they have less confidence in themselves, which leads to isolation and depression.

　　3.列舉式。

　　如談?wù)搨€(gè)人對(duì)網(wǎng)上購物的看法。一方面利用正反式談?wù)撈鋬?yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn), 另一方面利用列舉式分別談其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。例如詳寫其優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

　　On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned, online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk to store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online. 4.相關(guān)式。

　　指圍繞對(duì)事物起決定作用的相關(guān)因素來談?wù)搯栴}。如就“如何減少交通事故”的主題談?wù)撊藗儜?yīng)該如何避免交通事故, 我們就可以圍繞造成交通事故的相關(guān)因素如司機(jī)和行人來談?wù)撊绾伪苊狻?What can we do to avoid traffic accidents?

　　(1) As to drivers: keep their emotions under control; respect others

　　(2) As to walkers/pedestrians and cyclists: strictly obey the traffic rules; value their own lives 5.細(xì)化主題句。 就“壓力對(duì)學(xué)生的影響”發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　It is obvious that too much pressure is harmful to us students. As we know, pressure not only destroys our motivation for study but also ruins our health. 6.說明結(jié)果或后果。 你對(duì)國家“禁止商場免費(fèi)提供塑料袋”的看法。

　　It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally-friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced. [寫作內(nèi)容] 以約120個(gè)詞對(duì)留堂這一做法進(jìn)行議論,內(nèi)容包括:

　?、?/p>

　　你或你同學(xué)的留堂經(jīng)歷； ⑵

　　你對(duì)留堂制度的看法; (列舉式) ⑶

　　其它督促學(xué)生認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)的辦法。 超級(jí)仿寫

　　If students fail to follow Thomas Jefferson High School’s requirements, they would be given detentions as punishment. Reasons for detention include late or incomplete homework and other disturbing behaviors.

　　This reminds me of my friend Li Hua’s experience in primary school. One day, he was talking with another classmate in class although the teacher had warned him several times.

　　As a result, he had to stay for an extra hour after school.

　　In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students. For one thing, with the detention policy, we students will learn that we should be responsible for our behavior. For another thing, the policy can make us finish our homework on time, which is good for our academic development. However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. Besides, students can be divided into groups to compete with each other so that we will work harder.

　　* 主題：自信的重要性 ( 觀點(diǎn)論證)

　　[提出觀點(diǎn)] Self-confidence plays an important role in anything we do. Just as Edison said, self-confidence is the first secret of success.

　　[論證]It is clear that self-confidence means trust in one’s abilities.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　(正面論證) If you are full of self-confidence, it will bring you creative power to play， arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties; as a result, your dreams will come true. (反面論證) On the contrary, if you have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything. Failure will be following you. It turns out that all your plans fall through. [論證] No one can deny another fact that self-confidence gives you light when you are in the dark and encouragement when you are discouraged. For example, the secret of Madam Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular.

　　[得出結(jié)論] From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have self-confidence if you want to achieve anything.

　　在根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫好段落主題句后, 就要圍繞主題句展開。展開的方式主要有：

　　靈活運(yùn)用超級(jí)模仿

　　1.正反式。

　　如就談?wù)\信與人生的關(guān)系這個(gè)話題, 可以利用正反式的邏輯組織材料: 誠信對(duì)人生的重要性; 沒有誠信的人會(huì)怎樣。

　　It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win respect from others, which is of great importance in our study and daily life, let alone in the business world. However, a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is, dishonesty will ruin his future. 2.遞進(jìn)式。

　　如談?wù)摗皟和逝值牟涣加绊憽? 可以從身體上進(jìn)而從精神上談?wù)摲逝謱?duì)兒童造成的不良影響。

　　As far as we know, obese children tend

　　to eat a lot but they take little exercise, as a result of which they often fall ill easily. Besides, because of their appearance, they have less confidence in themselves, which leads to isolation and depression.

　　3.列舉式。

　　如談?wù)搨€(gè)人對(duì)網(wǎng)上購物的看法。一方面利用正反式談?wù)撈鋬?yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn), 另一方面利用列舉式分別談其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。例如詳寫其優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

　　On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned, online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk to store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online. 4.相關(guān)式。

　　指圍繞對(duì)事物起決定作用的相關(guān)因素來談?wù)搯栴}。如就“如何減少交通事故”的主題談?wù)撊藗儜?yīng)該如何避免交通事故, 我們就可以圍繞造成交通事故的相關(guān)因素如司機(jī)和行人來談?wù)撊绾伪苊狻?What can we do to avoid traffic accidents?

　　(1) As to drivers: keep their emotions under control; respect others

　　(2) As to walkers/pedestrians and cyclists: strictly obey the traffic rules; value their own lives 5.細(xì)化主題句。 就“壓力對(duì)學(xué)生的影響”發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　It is obvious that too much pressure is harmful to us students. As we know, pressure not only destroys our motivation for study but also ruins our health. 6.說明結(jié)果或后果。 你對(duì)國家“禁止商場免費(fèi)提供塑料袋”的看法。

　　It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally-friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced. [寫作內(nèi)容] 以約120個(gè)詞對(duì)留堂這一做法進(jìn)行議論,內(nèi)容包括:

　?、?/p>

　　你或你同學(xué)的留堂經(jīng)歷； ⑵

　　你對(duì)留堂制度的看法; (列舉式) ⑶

　　其它督促學(xué)生認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)的辦法。 超級(jí)仿寫

　　If students fail to follow Thomas Jefferson High School’s requirements, they would be given detentions as punishment. Reasons for detention include late or incomplete homework and other disturbing behaviors.

　　This reminds me of my friend Li Hua’s experience in primary school. One day, he was talking with another classmate in class although the teacher had warned him several times.

　　As a result, he had to stay for an extra hour after school.

　　In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students. For one thing, with the detention policy, we students will learn that we should be responsible for our behavior. For another thing, the policy can make us finish our homework on time, which is good for our academic development. However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. Besides, students can be divided into groups to compete with each other so that we will work harder.