2024屆高考英語寫作分類掌握復(fù)習(xí)課件：20 提出建議類（新人教版）

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　　I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. [引出建議] Here are some tips to help you.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　[列舉建議] First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, (理由) which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally， you should try to join in a discussion, (理由) letting people know how friendly you are.

　　I hope you find these ideas useful. 一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 引出建議 → 列舉建議與理由(→ 希望)

　　二、句式模板 1.引出建議可以用：

　　⑴ Here are my suggestions on how to ...

　　靈活運(yùn)用超級(jí)模仿 ⑵ Suggestions on ... can be listed as follows.

　?、?The ways for you to ... can be suggested as follows. 2.列舉建議可以用：

　　⑴ first of all/first/to begin with；second (ly)/then/besides/in addition/what’s more；finally/lastly/last but not least

　　⑵ for one thing ...and for another (thing) 3.在列舉的建議后常常會(huì)用起補(bǔ)充說明作用的分詞短語、定語從句等說明提出此建議的理由或原因。 三、語篇模板

　　It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy. [引出] The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows. [列舉] Firstly, we should have a healthy diet, which means a variety of food including meat, fresh fruits and vegetables.

　　Secondly, drink more water instead of a lot of drinks. Lastly, do some exercise every day, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on, for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot. 四、超級(jí)仿寫 基礎(chǔ)寫作

　　假定你是李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上, 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助：

　　[寫作內(nèi)容] 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上帖子內(nèi)容, 給Grow-up回貼, 并包括以下要點(diǎn)：

　　1.你對(duì)這一問題的看法(已給出)；

　　2.告訴Grown-up要理解而不要傷害母親；

　　3.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議: 多與母親交流;

　　行動(dòng)上證明自己已成年。 Hi, Grown-up， ... Hi, Grown-up，

　　As a student of your age, I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers.

　　However, you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings.[引出建議] Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.

　　[列舉建議] First， it’s advisable to talk more with your mom， (理由) which

　　will help you understand each other better. Second， you should learn to do your own things well by yourself， (理由) proving

　　to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”.

　　It’s even better if you could share more of the housework，

　　(列舉) such as

　　cleaning， washing and cooking.

　　讀寫任務(wù) 閱讀下面的短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150個(gè)詞左右的英語短文。

　　Shi Fang spends more than 4, 000 yuan a month shopping, but she rarely goes to the shopping mall. “Why need a shopping mall if you have Taobao? I am a Taobaoer, ” says Shi, 28, a freelance writer (自由作家) in Beijing. Taobao, China’s largest online shopping site has become an essential part

　　of Shi Fang’s life.

　　She spends half of her monthly salary to Taobao, logging onto the website every day, even when she doesn’t need anything, simply to “stay updated to the latest items”.

　　A growing number of Chinese Internet users like Shi have discovered the joys of online shopping.

　　The China Internet Network Information Center (CNNIC) announced in December that more than 87million Chinese made purchases on the Internet in the first half year, which means one out of four Chinese netizens (網(wǎng)民) have online shopping experience.

　　It is estimated that the annual consumption from online shopping will reach more than 250 billion yuan this year, and 80 percent of this is carried out through Taobao. com, China’s fast-growing e-commerce hub (電子商務(wù)中心) established in 2003.

　　[寫作內(nèi)容] 1.以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“網(wǎng)購”為主題發(fā)表你的看法, 內(nèi)容包括:

　　(1) 敘述你自己或身邊朋友的一次網(wǎng)購經(jīng)歷。 (2) 分析現(xiàn)實(shí)購物與網(wǎng)購的各自的好處。 (3) 對(duì)于購物你有何建議?

　　The passage mainly tells us that more and more netizens in China like Shi Fang buy goods on the Internet, among which Taobao is the largest online shopping site.

　　Almost two months ago, I wanted to buy my mother a birthday present, but I didn’t have much time to go shopping. I surfed the Internet and found a pink handbag which I thought would fit my mother perfectly. I

　　paid and received it seven days later. To

　　my delight, my mother liked it very much.

　　There is no doubt that shopping online has some advantages. First of all, it’s quite convenient to shop online for we needn’t go from one shop to another, so we can save lots of time. In addition,, shopping online is also cheaper and more colorful to us and the Internet provides us with the goods coming in all shapes, sizes and colors, which can meet our demands.

　　However, traditional shopping also has its own benefits. For one thing, our personal information may be let out when shopping online. For another, when going shopping in person, you can experience the color, shape, and quality of goods and enjoy discussing your choices with friends.

　　In my opinion, shopping on the Internet and buying in stores are both important to us in our daily life. We should consider carefully and choose what we want to buy according our own situations.

　　來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com 來源：ziyuanku.com * * 主題: 給交友有困難的同學(xué)提建議。

　　I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. [引出建議] Here are some tips to help you.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　[列舉建議] First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, (理由) which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally， you should try to join in a discussion, (理由) letting people know how friendly you are.

　　I hope you find these ideas useful. 一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 引出建議 → 列舉建議與理由(→ 希望)

　　二、句式模板 1.引出建議可以用：

　?、?Here are my suggestions on how to ...

　　靈活運(yùn)用超級(jí)模仿 ⑵ Suggestions on ... can be listed as follows.

　?、?The ways for you to ... can be suggested as follows. 2.列舉建議可以用：

　　⑴ first of all/first/to begin with；second (ly)/then/besides/in addition/what’s more；finally/lastly/last but not least

　?、?for one thing ...and for another (thing) 3.在列舉的建議后常常會(huì)用起補(bǔ)充說明作用的分詞短語、定語從句等說明提出此建議的理由或原因。 三、語篇模板

　　It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy. [引出] The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows. [列舉] Firstly, we should have a healthy diet, which means a variety of food including meat, fresh fruits and vegetables.

　　Secondly, drink more water instead of a lot of drinks. Lastly, do some exercise every day, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on, for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot. 四、超級(jí)仿寫 基礎(chǔ)寫作

　　假定你是李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上, 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助：

　　[寫作內(nèi)容] 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上帖子內(nèi)容, 給Grow-up回貼, 并包括以下要點(diǎn)：

　　1.你對(duì)這一問題的看法(已給出)；

　　2.告訴Grown-up要理解而不要傷害母親；

　　3.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議: 多與母親交流;

　　行動(dòng)上證明自己已成年。 Hi, Grown-up， ... Hi, Grown-up，

　　As a student of your age, I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers.

　　However, you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings.[引出建議] Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.

　　[列舉建議] First， it’s advisable to talk more with your mom， (理由) which

　　will help you understand each other better. Second， you should learn to do your own things well by yourself， (理由) proving

　　to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”.

　　It’s even better if you could share more of the housework，

　　(列舉) such as

　　cleaning， washing and cooking.

　　讀寫任務(wù) 閱讀下面的短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150個(gè)詞左右的英語短文。

　　Shi Fang spends more than 4, 000 yuan a month shopping, but she rarely goes to the shopping mall. “Why need a shopping mall if you have Taobao? I am a Taobaoer, ” says Shi, 28, a freelance writer (自由作家) in Beijing. Taobao, China’s largest online shopping site has become an essential part

　　of Shi Fang’s life.

　　She spends half of her monthly salary to Taobao, logging onto the website every day, even when she doesn’t need anything, simply to “stay updated to the latest items”.

　　A growing number of Chinese Internet users like Shi have discovered the joys of online shopping.

　　The China Internet Network Information Center (CNNIC) announced in December that more than 87million Chinese made purchases on the Internet in the first half year, which means one out of four Chinese netizens (網(wǎng)民) have online shopping experience.

　　It is estimated that the annual consumption from online shopping will reach more than 250 billion yuan this year, and 80 percent of this is carried out through Taobao. com, China’s fast-growing e-commerce hub (電子商務(wù)中心) established in 2003.

　　[寫作內(nèi)容] 1.以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“網(wǎng)購”為主題發(fā)表你的看法, 內(nèi)容包括:

　　(1) 敘述你自己或身邊朋友的一次網(wǎng)購經(jīng)歷。 (2) 分析現(xiàn)實(shí)購物與網(wǎng)購的各自的好處。 (3) 對(duì)于購物你有何建議?

　　The passage mainly tells us that more and more netizens in China like Shi Fang buy goods on the Internet, among which Taobao is the largest online shopping site.

　　Almost two months ago, I wanted to buy my mother a birthday present, but I didn’t have much time to go shopping. I surfed the Internet and found a pink handbag which I thought would fit my mother perfectly. I

　　paid and received it seven days later. To

　　my delight, my mother liked it very much.

　　There is no doubt that shopping online has some advantages. First of all, it’s quite convenient to shop online for we needn’t go from one shop to another, so we can save lots of time. In addition,, shopping online is also cheaper and more colorful to us and the Internet provides us with the goods coming in all shapes, sizes and colors, which can meet our demands.

　　However, traditional shopping also has its own benefits. For one thing, our personal information may be let out when shopping online. For another, when going shopping in person, you can experience the color, shape, and quality of goods and enjoy discussing your choices with friends.

　　In my opinion, shopping on the Internet and buying in stores are both important to us in our daily life. We should consider carefully and choose what we want to buy according our own situations.