2024屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選短文改錯(cuò)38

　　高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選：短文改錯(cuò)

　　1.

　　文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

　　2.

　　文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計(jì)分。

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　該文中共有十處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ＼）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改十處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.

　　4.

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fast．I thought he was going to ask for his parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food．

　　5.

　　下面文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（/），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Dear editor,

　　Next year I will go to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I don’t know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I don’t think it’s so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future?

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　6.

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　 試卷答案

　　1.

　　Ten years ago, I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the short circuit,

　　that(which) caused the accident.

　　2.

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers

　　an

　　competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we

　　problems

　　However

　　stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and

　　stressed

　　both

　　necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make

　　a

　　remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and

　　or

　　rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't

　　making

　　cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of

　　to

　　the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the

　　successfully

　　relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改為which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改為health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改為following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改為goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改為disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改為are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改為 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改為 it）.

　　4.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此處加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunatelyortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fast．I thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food．

　　5.

　　1. becoming改為become

　　2. and改為but

　　3. at后加a

　　4. we改為they

　　5. feel改為feeling或feel前加and

　　6. phone改為phones

　　7. 去掉the

　　8. rented改為rent

　　9. safely改為safe

　　10. used后加to

　　6.

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old

　　deeply

　　man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and

　　knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people

　　worse

　　directions/all 改any

　　around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.

　　rushed

　　knowing

　　Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the

　　up

　　money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of

　　missing /lost

　　nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　our

　　that

　　高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)提升精選：短文改錯(cuò)

　　1.

　　文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

　　2.

　　文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計(jì)分。

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　該文中共有十處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ＼）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改十處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.

　　4.

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fast．I thought he was going to ask for his parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food．

　　5.

　　下面文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（/），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Dear editor,

　　Next year I will go to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I don’t know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I don’t think it’s so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future?

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　6.

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　 試卷答案

　　1.

　　Ten years ago, I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the short circuit,

　　that(which) caused the accident.

　　2.

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers

　　an

　　competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we

　　problems

　　However

　　stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and

　　stressed

　　both

　　necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make

　　a

　　remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and

　　or

　　rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't

　　making

　　cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of

　　to

　　the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the

　　successfully

　　relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改為which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改為health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改為following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改為goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改為disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改為are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改為 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改為 it）.

　　4.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此處加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunatelyortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fast．I thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food．

　　5.

　　1. becoming改為become

　　2. and改為but

　　3. at后加a

　　4. we改為they

　　5. feel改為feeling或feel前加and

　　6. phone改為phones

　　7. 去掉the

　　8. rented改為rent

　　9. safely改為safe

　　10. used后加to

　　6.

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old

　　deeply

　　man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and

　　knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people

　　worse

　　directions/all 改any

　　around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.

　　rushed

　　knowing

　　Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the

　　up

　　money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of

　　missing /lost

　　nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　our

　　that