2024屆牛津英語第二輪復(fù)習(xí)課件 表格作文
第二步:調(diào)查結(jié)果
2. 方式一:82%的考生要求先考試,在知道成績后再填報(bào)志愿。 Most students, about 82%, insist that the choice should be based on their score after the College Entrance Exams.
3. 方式二:12%的考生選擇考試后,在成績揭曉前,估分填報(bào)志愿。 12% of the students, however, believe that the choice should be made right after the exams.
4. 方式三:6%的考生喜歡在考試前就填報(bào)好志愿。 Interestingly, 6% of the students hold the idea that the choice should be made before the exams.
第三步:我的觀點(diǎn)
5. 我選擇成績揭曉后再填報(bào)志愿,這樣可以做出正確的、恰當(dāng)?shù)倪x擇。 Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score so that I can make a proper choice.
6. 另外兩種填報(bào)方式帶有很大的盲目性。 The other two options would seem to blindfold us.
7. 如果考前就填好了志愿,可能會使學(xué)生考試時(shí)產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒,對考場的發(fā)揮帶來負(fù)面的影響。 In addition, if the big choice were made before the exams, it might bring anxiety during the exams, which naturally would have a negative effect on our performance.
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表格作文
(2024·江蘇卷)生活中沖突時(shí)有發(fā)生。假設(shè)你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江打籃球時(shí)發(fā)生爭執(zhí),導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請你結(jié)合此事,并根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文,向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。 注意: 1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。 2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本篇書面表達(dá)只給出寫作框架,并未給出所有的寫作細(xì)節(jié),題目比較貼近學(xué)生的話題。主要是兩個(gè)學(xué)生鬧矛盾,讓他們提出觀點(diǎn)和解決方法。這樣的題型也需要同學(xué)平時(shí)多留心身邊發(fā)生的事,多思考生活。這給考生留有自由發(fā)揮的空間。因此考生要合理展開行文,簡要描述引發(fā)沖突的經(jīng)過、分析發(fā)生沖突的原因并談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法,同時(shí)要注意文章的邏輯性和段落層次性,注意不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【參考答案】
Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 【參考答案】
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 【作文點(diǎn)評】
本文包含了所有表格中出現(xiàn)的要點(diǎn),語言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),時(shí)態(tài)使用正確。本文最好的兩點(diǎn)是恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,以及復(fù)雜的句式,這樣可以使行文更加流暢。
圖表作文是近幾年高考常選的命題方式之一。在高考中常以兩種形式對學(xué)生進(jìn)行考查,一種是文字表格式,另一種是柱形或餅形圖表式。文字表格式在近幾年全國各省每年都考查過,而柱形或餅形圖表式作文則在2006年的湖北卷及2004年的北京卷出現(xiàn)過。湖南省在2008年的高考中,是另一種形式的圖表作文:文字表格+人物圖像。這些數(shù)據(jù)說明,高考命題者對圖表作文還是比較青睞的。
●文字表格式
文字表格式作文的體裁相對穩(wěn)定,以說明文、議論文為主,輔之以記敘文。題材豐富多樣,有書信、發(fā)言稿、介紹等,通常情況下,試題明確規(guī)定了所使用的寫作格式。因此,考生只需根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,確定所要表達(dá)的寫作要點(diǎn),運(yùn)用自己所掌握的句型和詞匯知識,做到:要點(diǎn)齊全、語句通順、條理清楚、表達(dá)明確、思路靈活、書寫工整。
具體操作時(shí)注意以下兩個(gè)方面:
一是布好局、謀好篇。動筆前,一定要根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,先確定表達(dá)文章所需的體裁,然后根據(jù)所給題材確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)。
二是確定寫作要點(diǎn)。在心中布局謀篇后,根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容確定寫作要點(diǎn),尤其是自由發(fā)揮或談感想的要點(diǎn)。全文最好以要點(diǎn)或短語形式列一個(gè)寫作提綱,以便不遺漏要點(diǎn)。
因此,同學(xué)們平時(shí)訓(xùn)練寫作時(shí),在認(rèn)真審題,分清體裁和題材后,應(yīng)逐個(gè)地、完整地把表格中的要點(diǎn)及需要自由發(fā)揮的要點(diǎn)找出來,然后根據(jù)不同體裁把要寫作的內(nèi)容清楚地表達(dá)出來。對于記敘文,根據(jù)表格提示,注意故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、起因和結(jié)果,寫作時(shí)常使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和第一人稱。對于說明文,把需要解說的事物性質(zhì)、對象、目的、用途等解釋清楚,寫作時(shí)常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。對于議論文,根據(jù)表格所給提示把要點(diǎn)(論點(diǎn)和論據(jù))以及自由發(fā)揮的觀點(diǎn)和論據(jù)闡釋清楚,寫作時(shí)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。對于應(yīng)用文,首先要注意它的寫作格式,如2010年高考閱卷對格式是這樣給分:發(fā)言稿的格式正確,給1分。
當(dāng)然,所有的寫作都要做到“結(jié)構(gòu)合理,內(nèi)容連貫,行文流暢,給6分(2010年湖南高考閱卷評分要求)”。
例:長沙最近計(jì)劃修建地鐵,這件事引發(fā)了人們的廣泛爭論。請根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇英文報(bào)道,客觀陳述人們的不同看法,并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。 贊成觀點(diǎn) 反對觀點(diǎn) 1. 解決交通擁堵問題,方便市民生活。 2. 提供一種新的交通方式,促進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)。 1. 建設(shè)時(shí)間長,影響日常生活。 2. 投入資金過大,成本回收過慢。 你的觀點(diǎn)…… 注意: 1. 不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使行文連貫; 2. 詞數(shù):不少于120。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文為利弊分析型作文?;緯r(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)??砂慈握摰姆绞絹黻愂鲱}目所規(guī)定的三個(gè)要點(diǎn):贊成觀點(diǎn);反對觀點(diǎn);自己的觀點(diǎn)。前面兩個(gè)部分題目給出了具體的內(nèi)容,寫作時(shí)要注意句式的正確性和多樣性。同時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用連接詞,使文章顯得流暢自然。第三部分為開放性作文,你需要表明你自己的觀點(diǎn),同時(shí)說明你的理由。
【參考答案】
Recently, people are having an argument on whether the subway should be built in Changsha or not. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people think it necessary to build the subway. For one thing, building the subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life. For another, it provides a new means of transportation, which is environmentally friendly. 【參考答案】
One coin has two sides. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, the long process of construction is bound to influence people's daily life. What's more, too much money will be spent building it, and it will take a long time to get the money back.
Weighing the pros and cons, I support the idea that the subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.
一、利弊型
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 作文主題. Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.
Some people think it necessary to 正方觀點(diǎn). For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二.
On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一. What's more, 反方理由二.
In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that作文主題. 你的理由.
二、觀點(diǎn)對比型
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主題.
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 持有第一種觀點(diǎn)的人數(shù). The reasons are as follows. First, 第一種理由. Besides, 第二種理由.
On the contrary, others say 他們的觀點(diǎn). They think 第一種理由. What's more, 第二種理由.
As far as I'm concerned, we should自己的觀點(diǎn). Only in this way美好前景預(yù)測.
●柱形或餅形圖表式
柱形或餅形圖表式作文的體裁多為議論文、說明文和應(yīng)用文,內(nèi)容大多涉及前后變化對比、正反觀點(diǎn)對比或產(chǎn)品介紹等。要求考生通過數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容分析,系統(tǒng)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出突變含義,并得出令人信服的結(jié)論。必須做到行文切題,緊扣中心思想,不漏要點(diǎn),并且意思連貫,文理通順,語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)。
柱形或餅形圖表式作文寫作形式和要求與文字表格式有所區(qū)別。寫圖表作文時(shí),要注意遵循以下步驟:
(1)認(rèn)真分析圖表的含義,弄清圖表中所含的信息及不同信息間的關(guān)系;柱形圖用來表示各種事物的變化情況及相互關(guān)系,要求考生通過寬度相等的柱形的高度或長度差別來判斷事物的動態(tài)發(fā)展趨勢,因此考生應(yīng)密切關(guān)注坐標(biāo)線上的刻度單位及圖表旁邊的提示說明與文字。餅形圖表示各事物在總體中所占的比例及相互關(guān)系,旨在要求考生準(zhǔn)確理解并闡述一個(gè)被分割成大小不等切片的餅形圖所傳達(dá)的信息??忌鷳?yīng)清楚掌握部分與整體,部分與部分之間的相互關(guān)系,這種關(guān)系通常是以百分比的數(shù)字形式給出的。
(2)確定文章的主題思想,構(gòu)思出文章的基本框架,篩選出能說明圖表主題思想的典型數(shù)據(jù);
(3)編列文章的提綱;
(4)根據(jù)文章的提綱,將各段的提綱內(nèi)容擴(kuò)展成段落,然后將各個(gè)段落組成文章,注意段與段之間的銜接與過渡。
實(shí)際寫作時(shí),常采用三段式的謀篇方式。
第一段:概述圖表反映的主題思想;
第二段:分析產(chǎn)生的原因;
第三段:展望未來或提出辦法或建議。 例:下面是某高中學(xué)校對150名高三學(xué)生睡眠時(shí)間不足及原因所作的調(diào)查,結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)圖1提供的信息描述高三學(xué)生的睡眠情況,并針對圖2中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的看法。 參考詞匯:圖表chart n. 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文屬圖表類作文,要仔細(xì)讀圖和圖前的文字說明。本文要求考生說明學(xué)生睡眠情況的調(diào)查結(jié)果。基本時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。以第三人稱的口氣來表達(dá)內(nèi)容。從寫作步驟來看,可先描述學(xué)生睡眠時(shí)間不足的具體數(shù)據(jù),然后針對圖2中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的一個(gè)看法。在介紹數(shù)據(jù)變化時(shí)應(yīng)特別注意表達(dá)的多樣性。 【參考答案】
Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day. Sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day, while thirty-seven of them can sleep seven to eight hours. However, only one percent can sleep over eight hours.
From Chart 2, we learn the reason why most senior 3 students don't have enough sleep. One of the reasons is that thirty-five students stay up late studying hard. I think it's not wise to do so. We should sleep well at night and wake up feeling more refreshed. So we can make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.
Recently, a survey has been done to find out 所要表達(dá)的主題. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的內(nèi)容1, 表中的內(nèi)容2. 表中的內(nèi)容3 and表中的內(nèi)容4.
In conclusion, the survey shows that總體規(guī)律、趨勢或呈現(xiàn)的問題. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.
In my opinion,自己的觀點(diǎn), 如何解決問題. 1
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentageinthe table (graph/pie chart), 作文題目的議題 has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具體變化數(shù)據(jù). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 得出結(jié)論.
There are 至少兩個(gè) reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因之一 . On the otherhand, 原因之二. In addition, 原因之三 is also responsible for it.
It is high time that we 發(fā)出倡議. We should 解決問題的方法或?qū)Σ?
2 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
央視《時(shí)空調(diào)查》欄目針對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報(bào)志愿的3種形式作了一個(gè)網(wǎng)上調(diào)查,調(diào)查的結(jié)果如下。你作為即將參加2024年高考的一名考生,請你簡要的描述調(diào)查的結(jié)果,談一談你對此事的看法并說明你的理由。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)不少于120; 2.可以適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容; 3.文章的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________
根據(jù)圖表作文的寫作技巧,我們先分步進(jìn)行翻譯寫作。
第一步:提出主題(考生填報(bào)志愿的3種方式)
1. 央視《時(shí)空調(diào)查》欄目針對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報(bào)志愿的3種形式作了一個(gè)網(wǎng)上調(diào)查。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities.
第二步:調(diào)查結(jié)果
2. 方式一:82%的考生要求先考試,在知道成績后再填報(bào)志愿。 Most students, about 82%, insist that the choice should be based on their score after the College Entrance Exams.
3. 方式二:12%的考生選擇考試后,在成績揭曉前,估分填報(bào)志愿。 12% of the students, however, believe that the choice should be made right after the exams.
4. 方式三:6%的考生喜歡在考試前就填報(bào)好志愿。 Interestingly, 6% of the students hold the idea that the choice should be made before the exams.
第三步:我的觀點(diǎn)
5. 我選擇成績揭曉后再填報(bào)志愿,這樣可以做出正確的、恰當(dāng)?shù)倪x擇。 Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score so that I can make a proper choice.
6. 另外兩種填報(bào)方式帶有很大的盲目性。 The other two options would seem to blindfold us.
7. 如果考前就填好了志愿,可能會使學(xué)生考試時(shí)產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒,對考場的發(fā)揮帶來負(fù)面的影響。 In addition, if the big choice were made before the exams, it might bring anxiety during the exams, which naturally would have a negative effect on our performance.
感謝您的關(guān)注 Thank you for your attention ! 第29講
表格作文
(2024·江蘇卷)生活中沖突時(shí)有發(fā)生。假設(shè)你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江打籃球時(shí)發(fā)生爭執(zhí),導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請你結(jié)合此事,并根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文,向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。 注意: 1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。 2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本篇書面表達(dá)只給出寫作框架,并未給出所有的寫作細(xì)節(jié),題目比較貼近學(xué)生的話題。主要是兩個(gè)學(xué)生鬧矛盾,讓他們提出觀點(diǎn)和解決方法。這樣的題型也需要同學(xué)平時(shí)多留心身邊發(fā)生的事,多思考生活。這給考生留有自由發(fā)揮的空間。因此考生要合理展開行文,簡要描述引發(fā)沖突的經(jīng)過、分析發(fā)生沖突的原因并談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法,同時(shí)要注意文章的邏輯性和段落層次性,注意不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【參考答案】
Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 【參考答案】
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 【作文點(diǎn)評】
本文包含了所有表格中出現(xiàn)的要點(diǎn),語言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),時(shí)態(tài)使用正確。本文最好的兩點(diǎn)是恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,以及復(fù)雜的句式,這樣可以使行文更加流暢。
圖表作文是近幾年高考常選的命題方式之一。在高考中常以兩種形式對學(xué)生進(jìn)行考查,一種是文字表格式,另一種是柱形或餅形圖表式。文字表格式在近幾年全國各省每年都考查過,而柱形或餅形圖表式作文則在2006年的湖北卷及2004年的北京卷出現(xiàn)過。湖南省在2008年的高考中,是另一種形式的圖表作文:文字表格+人物圖像。這些數(shù)據(jù)說明,高考命題者對圖表作文還是比較青睞的。
●文字表格式
文字表格式作文的體裁相對穩(wěn)定,以說明文、議論文為主,輔之以記敘文。題材豐富多樣,有書信、發(fā)言稿、介紹等,通常情況下,試題明確規(guī)定了所使用的寫作格式。因此,考生只需根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,確定所要表達(dá)的寫作要點(diǎn),運(yùn)用自己所掌握的句型和詞匯知識,做到:要點(diǎn)齊全、語句通順、條理清楚、表達(dá)明確、思路靈活、書寫工整。
具體操作時(shí)注意以下兩個(gè)方面:
一是布好局、謀好篇。動筆前,一定要根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,先確定表達(dá)文章所需的體裁,然后根據(jù)所給題材確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)。
二是確定寫作要點(diǎn)。在心中布局謀篇后,根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容確定寫作要點(diǎn),尤其是自由發(fā)揮或談感想的要點(diǎn)。全文最好以要點(diǎn)或短語形式列一個(gè)寫作提綱,以便不遺漏要點(diǎn)。
因此,同學(xué)們平時(shí)訓(xùn)練寫作時(shí),在認(rèn)真審題,分清體裁和題材后,應(yīng)逐個(gè)地、完整地把表格中的要點(diǎn)及需要自由發(fā)揮的要點(diǎn)找出來,然后根據(jù)不同體裁把要寫作的內(nèi)容清楚地表達(dá)出來。對于記敘文,根據(jù)表格提示,注意故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、起因和結(jié)果,寫作時(shí)常使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和第一人稱。對于說明文,把需要解說的事物性質(zhì)、對象、目的、用途等解釋清楚,寫作時(shí)常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。對于議論文,根據(jù)表格所給提示把要點(diǎn)(論點(diǎn)和論據(jù))以及自由發(fā)揮的觀點(diǎn)和論據(jù)闡釋清楚,寫作時(shí)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。對于應(yīng)用文,首先要注意它的寫作格式,如2010年高考閱卷對格式是這樣給分:發(fā)言稿的格式正確,給1分。
當(dāng)然,所有的寫作都要做到“結(jié)構(gòu)合理,內(nèi)容連貫,行文流暢,給6分(2010年湖南高考閱卷評分要求)”。
例:長沙最近計(jì)劃修建地鐵,這件事引發(fā)了人們的廣泛爭論。請根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇英文報(bào)道,客觀陳述人們的不同看法,并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。 贊成觀點(diǎn) 反對觀點(diǎn) 1. 解決交通擁堵問題,方便市民生活。 2. 提供一種新的交通方式,促進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)。 1. 建設(shè)時(shí)間長,影響日常生活。 2. 投入資金過大,成本回收過慢。 你的觀點(diǎn)…… 注意: 1. 不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使行文連貫; 2. 詞數(shù):不少于120。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文為利弊分析型作文。基本時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)??砂慈握摰姆绞絹黻愂鲱}目所規(guī)定的三個(gè)要點(diǎn):贊成觀點(diǎn);反對觀點(diǎn);自己的觀點(diǎn)。前面兩個(gè)部分題目給出了具體的內(nèi)容,寫作時(shí)要注意句式的正確性和多樣性。同時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用連接詞,使文章顯得流暢自然。第三部分為開放性作文,你需要表明你自己的觀點(diǎn),同時(shí)說明你的理由。
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Recently, people are having an argument on whether the subway should be built in Changsha or not. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people think it necessary to build the subway. For one thing, building the subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life. For another, it provides a new means of transportation, which is environmentally friendly. 【參考答案】
One coin has two sides. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, the long process of construction is bound to influence people's daily life. What's more, too much money will be spent building it, and it will take a long time to get the money back.
Weighing the pros and cons, I support the idea that the subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.
一、利弊型
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 作文主題. Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.
Some people think it necessary to 正方觀點(diǎn). For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二.
On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一. What's more, 反方理由二.
In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that作文主題. 你的理由.
二、觀點(diǎn)對比型
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主題.
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 持有第一種觀點(diǎn)的人數(shù). The reasons are as follows. First, 第一種理由. Besides, 第二種理由.
On the contrary, others say 他們的觀點(diǎn). They think 第一種理由. What's more, 第二種理由.
As far as I'm concerned, we should自己的觀點(diǎn). Only in this way美好前景預(yù)測.
●柱形或餅形圖表式
柱形或餅形圖表式作文的體裁多為議論文、說明文和應(yīng)用文,內(nèi)容大多涉及前后變化對比、正反觀點(diǎn)對比或產(chǎn)品介紹等。要求考生通過數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容分析,系統(tǒng)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出突變含義,并得出令人信服的結(jié)論。必須做到行文切題,緊扣中心思想,不漏要點(diǎn),并且意思連貫,文理通順,語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)。
柱形或餅形圖表式作文寫作形式和要求與文字表格式有所區(qū)別。寫圖表作文時(shí),要注意遵循以下步驟:
(1)認(rèn)真分析圖表的含義,弄清圖表中所含的信息及不同信息間的關(guān)系;柱形圖用來表示各種事物的變化情況及相互關(guān)系,要求考生通過寬度相等的柱形的高度或長度差別來判斷事物的動態(tài)發(fā)展趨勢,因此考生應(yīng)密切關(guān)注坐標(biāo)線上的刻度單位及圖表旁邊的提示說明與文字。餅形圖表示各事物在總體中所占的比例及相互關(guān)系,旨在要求考生準(zhǔn)確理解并闡述一個(gè)被分割成大小不等切片的餅形圖所傳達(dá)的信息??忌鷳?yīng)清楚掌握部分與整體,部分與部分之間的相互關(guān)系,這種關(guān)系通常是以百分比的數(shù)字形式給出的。
(2)確定文章的主題思想,構(gòu)思出文章的基本框架,篩選出能說明圖表主題思想的典型數(shù)據(jù);
(3)編列文章的提綱;
(4)根據(jù)文章的提綱,將各段的提綱內(nèi)容擴(kuò)展成段落,然后將各個(gè)段落組成文章,注意段與段之間的銜接與過渡。
實(shí)際寫作時(shí),常采用三段式的謀篇方式。
第一段:概述圖表反映的主題思想;
第二段:分析產(chǎn)生的原因;
第三段:展望未來或提出辦法或建議。 例:下面是某高中學(xué)校對150名高三學(xué)生睡眠時(shí)間不足及原因所作的調(diào)查,結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)圖1提供的信息描述高三學(xué)生的睡眠情況,并針對圖2中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的看法。 參考詞匯:圖表chart n. 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文屬圖表類作文,要仔細(xì)讀圖和圖前的文字說明。本文要求考生說明學(xué)生睡眠情況的調(diào)查結(jié)果?;緯r(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。以第三人稱的口氣來表達(dá)內(nèi)容。從寫作步驟來看,可先描述學(xué)生睡眠時(shí)間不足的具體數(shù)據(jù),然后針對圖2中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的一個(gè)看法。在介紹數(shù)據(jù)變化時(shí)應(yīng)特別注意表達(dá)的多樣性。 【參考答案】
Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day. Sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day, while thirty-seven of them can sleep seven to eight hours. However, only one percent can sleep over eight hours.
From Chart 2, we learn the reason why most senior 3 students don't have enough sleep. One of the reasons is that thirty-five students stay up late studying hard. I think it's not wise to do so. We should sleep well at night and wake up feeling more refreshed. So we can make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.
Recently, a survey has been done to find out 所要表達(dá)的主題. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的內(nèi)容1, 表中的內(nèi)容2. 表中的內(nèi)容3 and表中的內(nèi)容4.
In conclusion, the survey shows that總體規(guī)律、趨勢或呈現(xiàn)的問題. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.
In my opinion,自己的觀點(diǎn), 如何解決問題. 1
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentageinthe table (graph/pie chart), 作文題目的議題 has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具體變化數(shù)據(jù). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 得出結(jié)論.
There are 至少兩個(gè) reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因之一 . On the otherhand, 原因之二. In addition, 原因之三 is also responsible for it.
It is high time that we 發(fā)出倡議. We should 解決問題的方法或?qū)Σ?
2 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
央視《時(shí)空調(diào)查》欄目針對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報(bào)志愿的3種形式作了一個(gè)網(wǎng)上調(diào)查,調(diào)查的結(jié)果如下。你作為即將參加2024年高考的一名考生,請你簡要的描述調(diào)查的結(jié)果,談一談你對此事的看法并說明你的理由。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)不少于120; 2.可以適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容; 3.文章的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________
根據(jù)圖表作文的寫作技巧,我們先分步進(jìn)行翻譯寫作。
第一步:提出主題(考生填報(bào)志愿的3種方式)
1. 央視《時(shí)空調(diào)查》欄目針對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報(bào)志愿的3種形式作了一個(gè)網(wǎng)上調(diào)查。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities.