考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)資料考研英語(yǔ)作文范文的批改11

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam， Your advertisement for a staff member in May 10,China daily interested me，because the position your provide(應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)，因?yàn)閺V告已經(jīng)刊登) there exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for. Accoring(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤providing)to your advertisement，you need a staff who is highly educated and has some related woking(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤) experience. I think I meet the requirements above. I graduated form(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤) ShangHai(h不用大寫(xiě)) University with a(m的發(fā)音是以元音開(kāi)頭，所以要用an) M.S.degree(最好不要用縮寫(xiě)). And I had worked in a relevent(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，relevant)company before. (這里可以再補(bǔ)充以下你有經(jīng)驗(yàn))Whats more, I had passed CET-6, and I can communicate with the native speaker(建議用復(fù)數(shù)) freely in English. I am a very friendly person who can quickly built friendship with others of all ages. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely(要有逗號(hào)) Li Ming(落款部分寫(xiě)在右下角) 點(diǎn)評(píng)：6-7分拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤有點(diǎn)多，另外一些格式上的規(guī)則要注意。第二段的第一條內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)化一下。