2024考研英語寫作范文模板點(diǎn)評

　　寫作原文

　　In the picture,there is an unbalanced seesaw on which the one side sitting a woman with her body shaking, and on the other side,15 men are going down on their knees asking the woman to marry them. The picture reveals the unbalancedsex ratio in our country. So what causes this phenomenon?In my opinion, there are mainly two reasons. First, the conception prefer sons to daughters is very popular in our country. Through it is not as intensive as in the old society, most parents,especially the ones in remote areas still want to have a son. Further more, along with the Birth control policy, some parents would choose to abandon their child when they know she is a girl.In order to solve this problem, various measures have to be adopted. As to the government, it should draw up laws to reinforce the punishment of abortion. As to the parents, they should change their prejudice to children, and build up the conception of It makes no differences if the baby is a girl or a boy. I think under the joint effort of the government and the individuals, the condition of unbalanced sex ratio will be improved in the near future.

　　總體點(diǎn)評

　　整體來說，文章寫得不錯(cuò);但還存在個(gè)別簡單的語法錯(cuò)誤。作者在寫作完之后若可以花費(fèi)幾分鐘時(shí)間來回讀文章，便會(huì)減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤。考研作文的整體思路你已經(jīng)基本掌握，后面要做的就是多積累高分佳句，為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認(rèn)真檢查，減少失分點(diǎn)。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

　　寫作原文

　　In the picture,there is an unbalanced seesaw on which the one side sitting a woman with her body shaking, and on the other side,15 men are going down on their knees asking the woman to marry them. The picture reveals the unbalancedsex ratio in our country. So what causes this phenomenon?In my opinion, there are mainly two reasons. First, the conception prefer sons to daughters is very popular in our country. Through it is not as intensive as in the old society, most parents,especially the ones in remote areas still want to have a son. Further more, along with the Birth control policy, some parents would choose to abandon their child when they know she is a girl.In order to solve this problem, various measures have to be adopted. As to the government, it should draw up laws to reinforce the punishment of abortion. As to the parents, they should change their prejudice to children, and build up the conception of It makes no differences if the baby is a girl or a boy. I think under the joint effort of the government and the individuals, the condition of unbalanced sex ratio will be improved in the near future.

　　總體點(diǎn)評

　　整體來說，文章寫得不錯(cuò);但還存在個(gè)別簡單的語法錯(cuò)誤。作者在寫作完之后若可以花費(fèi)幾分鐘時(shí)間來回讀文章，便會(huì)減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤?？佳凶魑牡恼w思路你已經(jīng)基本掌握，后面要做的就是多積累高分佳句，為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認(rèn)真檢查，減少失分點(diǎn)。加油吧，祝你考研成功!