小學六年級英語作文：Li Ying ’S Hobby

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Li Ying S Hobby

　　Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

　　Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

　　【要領點評】

　　這一篇寫愛好的文章,小作者的寫作思路很值得我們學習,他沒有具體寫到劉瑩的某一種愛好,而是從學習到課余的多種愛好入手,對劉瑩的各種愛好進行了粗線條地勾畫.從愛好這個角度來看劉瑩的話，我們會覺得這個形象很飽滿。

　　小朋友們寫這種敘事寫人作文時，可以從兩個角度下手：一是具體地描繪;二是和上面小朋友一樣，粗線條地勾畫，二者各有所長，另處在行文中使用一些問句，使用一些轉述的話，可以使作文更有靈氣，避免了平鋪直敘的缺點。比如上文的Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.和she says her hobbies make her happy.就是十分不錯的句子，使讀者眼前為之一亮。